bm17 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos345 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 O.o' I spy errors. Big ones. Fix them and I shall give you a rating. Otherwise, 1.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Delspencerdeltorro Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 First one sounds too similar to Pitch Dark Dragon. Most of these cards aren't particularly helpful or original, but I do like Call to Action. It's overpowered, though. It needs some sort of cost (a high one. take a look at skill drain) and you should remove the ATK increase. Second chance currently takes your opponent's removed-from-play cards too. Dragon's Fury isn't amazing, but it's useful without being overpowered. You've got some potential, so keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bm17 Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Thanks for the feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zekuza Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 yeah, i agree. call to action is a little too powerful. Otherwise, not bad :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Vanillas needs effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bm17 Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 The ideas of the normal cards wa to have something for call to power Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylexus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Shouldnt Dread Knight be a tuner judging by his effect? Or is he intentionally just an effect monster? 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bm17 Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 just an effect, i actually just made him for the use to summon another syncro nonster i made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 cards 2, 3, and 4 need effects or they'll be terrible 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delspencerdeltorro Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Second chance: return all of your monsters that have been removed form play to the bottom of your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zack was here :p Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 like trhe cards pics and everthing else9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
power ranger man Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Normal cards need some effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Nillas :( 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joaquim 12 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 oh yea ok babygarfield Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Aiku: My eyes! Vanillas! OCG: It's a bit beated, but still capable of walking. Good thing, since I saw many 1 star member with terrible OCG in my time here >x>... Even thought I'm just 3 stars.one = 1spell/ trap = Spell or TrapOnce per turn = Once per turn,destroy a Spell/Trap = destroy 1 Spell or TrapEffect: The effect are good for a first star member, except that there's vanillas. I'm sure you can find effect for them.Image and Name: The image are good, but some of them doesn't fit well with the name. "Pitch Black Dragon", for exemple, more look like a dragon which is going into a object or is absorbed by something. Overall: 6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bm17 Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 wow you guys really hate normal monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delspencerdeltorro Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 wow you guys really hate normal monsters They'll go a bit easier on you if you give them more support, but they'll probably never like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 I like normal monsters so don't listen to them. Make as many normal monsters as you want. There are some OCG errors. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 pretty dang good for a newbynice job couple ocg errors and i would make a support card or more for the bludskull cards6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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