Ryu Senshi Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Here are my first three cards. They're kind of random but I like them. I'm a fan of Dragons so two of them are Dragon-Type. I think the OCG is right becuase I looked at real cards for reference. Please tell me what you think. You can Special Summon this card from your hand by Releasing all monsters on your field during a turn in which your opponent recieved 2000 or more effect damage from cards you control. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster with 2000 ATK or less from your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy up to 2 cards on the field. If this card battles with a monster on your opponent's field and neither monster is destroyed by battle, destroy both monsters. This card cannot attack your opponent directly, unless no other monster on your field has declared an attack this turn. 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThe Level of this card can be treated as 5 or 7 for the Synchro Summon of this card. Increase the ATK of this card by 200 for every WATER monster in your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 wow are u sure yourre not double accounting becase those cards are good even for a 5 star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Can't read first cards effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 oh right post the effects 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 First card's effect makes no sense at the beginning.The second half's better. Weird effect for the Berserker, quite self-destructive. Third card: what is with the effect? Make your mind up!Work on your OCG 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryu Senshi Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Thanks for the responses, I posted the card text under the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I agree with Max Darkness, some of the effects aren't all that clear. And some OCG errors, overall 6/10, room to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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