Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I made one card this time. Please tell me if it's any good. I really want to make a new set (That is good). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 overpowered...7/10 pic is ok though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Nice picture and ok effect but i think you should add more to it, it seems super dull. OCG is perfect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Changing the atk, thanks. EDIT: Lovely Lady Duelist - Would adding "This card returns to your hand during your end phase." help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 OP if you want to make it post it in any other card section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holymush332 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 should maybe add that you lose of of the life points dealt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Changing the atk' date=' thanks. EDIT: Lovely Lady Duelist - Would adding "This card returns to your hand during your end phase." help?[/quote'] ya and try what holymush said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 "You lose life points equal to half of the damage dealt." Would that work (OCG and all). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 yup (dont forget to capitalize: Life Points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Thanks... I'm bad at knowing what to capitalize. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 A little to overpowered and simple. Nothing else to say, really. A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 I updated the card. Please check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Now, that's more like it, but now that it has a cost, you can tune its ATK up to 1400-1500 or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Ya you didnt have to lower its attack that much but its still great 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Thanks everybody. I'll make the atk 1400. You guys finally gave me an idea of how to make a good card. Now to do the same with my other cards... Updating Card... Oh, and can I add you two to my friends? NEXT: Level Androids, lvl3, 5, and 7. "Spellcrafted Android Lvl?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 If you mean me, then sure. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 looks balanced now, minor burn effect, pic looks great too 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Thanks! One other thing- should I make all of the upcoming android cards have the "return to hand" effect. I found a great image for a field spell and the effect of the spell could be not needing to return. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Sure, try that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Updated, added about... 5 cards. Please tell me how to improve them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted June 23, 2009 Report Share Posted June 23, 2009 Nice cards, with nice art and effects! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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