superexex Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 I just wonder what you think about this card? Please Comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Aiku: Wow... volcano. 8D*Volcano Golem is coming out of the volcano!*Aiku: 8D ... Oh yo-yo. OCG (Original Card Grammar): For a level 1 member, you're OCG is very good, but you still made beginner mistakes.successfully Summoned = (just put) Summonedtribute = Tributethree monsters to summon this card. = 3 monsters to Tribute Summon this card.were Summoned = was Summoned.Effect: The effect is REALLY simple, but the last one isn't need, just scrap it away.Image and Name: I see a monster coming out of the volcano and an enough good art to show it. Good. Overall: 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Wolf Sif Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 You realize how you worded the effect that when he's summoned that he will also destroy himself right?!?!?!?!?Good job though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Thanks!And i forgeted to write (exept this card). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 not bad for bursting out of the ground to symbolize the eruption, but you were supposed to say when this card is successfully summoned, all OTHER cards on the field are destroyed, otherwise it'll just destroy itself with it as soon as it's summoned 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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