TheAlpha Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Lore1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersDuring battle between this attacking card and an Attack Position monster, have this monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of the opponent's monster it is battling, until the End Phase. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the effect. During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card from play to destroy all cards on the field. Here is my most precious creation. Please comment and tell me how I can improve Radiant God Dragon. I want to make him as perfect as possible. THXBumpeth.... Someone please comment.... I'll give you a rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 nice pic...here is the OCG fix...If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the effect. During your Standby Phase, you can (remove this card from play;sent it to the Graveyard) this card to destroy all cards on the field. i think i helped you...^^rate: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 After the fixes DominikIII just said the card is awesome. 10/10 (I love the pic.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAlpha Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 THX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Exclude = exclude. Good OCG, decent pic. Good card for a newbie. (discard 1 card from your hand = discard 1 card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAlpha Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 THX Liam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 np...^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabber2033 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 The only thing I noticed was that you put the credits for the pic where the circulation goes. Don't do this. It takes away some of the realism. Put the credits at the end of your post instead. 9/10 otherwise. Good job! Just as a suggestion, I think you should do a Radiant God Dragon/Assault Mode. That would kick a**!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 If the opponent declares an attack on this monster, until the End Phase, increase the ATK of this card equal to the ATK of the opponent's monster. You can discard 1 card from your hand to negate 1 effect that would destroy this card. During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card from play to destroy all cards on the field. I think that's better rewording of it. Also, I think it is overpowered. Increase the level to 12, or set it to a 6-Star Light Tuner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAlpha Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 If the opponent declares an attack on this monster' date=' until the End Phase, increase the ATK of this card equal to the ATK of the opponent's monster. You can discard 1 card from your hand to negate 1 effect that would destroy this card. During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card from play to destroy all cards on the field. I think that's better rewording of it. Also, I think it is overpowered. Increase the level to 12, or set it to a 6-Star Light Tuner.[/quote']Actually, it doesn't quite cross the line of QP since its battle stats are low for its LV. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Your opponent needs atleast 2 monsters to take it down, and one of them needs 3200+. With a 3200 (>Bewd), which means your opponent will need 3 tributes to bring out a 3300 monster. Once this thing is out, your opponent won't have a chance to even get 3 monsters on the field, and it's practically game over. Also, it is indestructible via card effects. Which means it can't die via staple cards i.e. sakuretsu armor. So to balance it, I would A.) Remove the 2nd and 3rd effects. B.) Raise the tuner to level 6/7+ C.) Lower the ATK to 2000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 with all the OCG fixes this is an awesome card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Lower atk to no more than 2000, as mentioned earlier... ocg: During battle between this attacking monster and an Attack Position monster, this monster gains ATK equal to the ATK of the attack target, until the End Phase. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate that effect. During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card from play to destroy all cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Hmmm.... Good OCG (From what I see) Effect is great. Pic Rocks. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Bind Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 POSITIVES:picture=awsomeunderstandable effect=vitle no OCG erros=great IMPROVMENTS:does it have to be a light monster I think it will be better as an earth oneother from that theres nothing more to i mprove. so the ovarall rating is: 9.5/10 (you just need to turn it into a earth then its the best card ive seen AND I MEAN IT!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Try lowering the ATK to 3000 other than that get it holoed man its perfict Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 The card is truely good for a beginner 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Awsnaw Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Lore1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersDuring battle between this attacking card and an Attack Position monster' date=' have this monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of the opponent's monster it is battling, until the End Phase. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the effect. During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card from play to destroy all cards on the field. Here is my most precious creation. Please comment and tell me how I can improve Radiant God Dragon. I want to make him as perfect as possible. THX[hr']Bumpeth.... Someone please comment.... I'll give you a rep. nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 This card is almost impossible to be destroyed, but its summoning conditions make it balancedAlso lower its ATK to 2000-2100. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Bind Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 were did you get that image it looks cool? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 seems like a decent card with the other fixes mentioned above it would be awesome :) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 ocg is ok, but atk and lv are too high. Drop it to lv6 and 2300ish or something 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAlpha Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 THX guys!! Making changes now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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