.Leo Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 here are my metal type cards. plz comment :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 My Main concern is simple Grammer Errors Can not- Cannot And the effects seems to be a bit dull try somthing like: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand or your Deck by Tributing 1 "Dark Metal Man" on your side of the field, this card can only be destroyed by a Fire Attribute monster. And try and find some better pictures And also seeing as the card is a Synchro, if you use my effect I suggest you change it to an Effect Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 ok thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 You know, Metal=MachineChange it because here is the Realistic Forum, if not change them to the Any Other Cards Forum -Zeaux Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted June 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 ok i will zeaux Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Dark Metal Man's effect WAY too simple and unimaginative 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydin611 Posted June 27, 2009 Report Share Posted June 27, 2009 weird 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 You know' date=' Metal=MachineChange it because here is the Realistic Forum, if not change them to the Any Other Cards Forum -Zeaux[/quote'] Or at least make then realistic enough. They don't have to totally conform to the real game to be realistic cards. Kale's Allies didn't ;) But Metal would be the same as Machine... try to think up something totally brand new ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 OCG errors and some pretty dull effects. Some cool art though. OK job. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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