barb00ch Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 i might need to tweak the effect what do you think? i like machine types so i thought this would be good what do you think.....btw this is my first post lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Ankku's effect is not bad, it's quite normal, but you have a lot of card grammar errors. The Machine support Spell Card is way overpowered though. You should make it like the other Machine support Spell Cards, where they are destroyed in a certain time. Oh, and you can't do ATK or DEF. It's one or the other, or both. You can't choose. If there is another Fiend-Type monster on the field, this card is not affected by Spell or Trap Cards. This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each Spell and Trap Card on the field. That's the correction for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barb00ch Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 thanks allot for the the help and yeah i no what you mean about the machine support card......like power limiter which destroys the cards at the end of the turn, but thanks again for the help :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 thanks allot for the the help and yeah i no what you mean about the machine support card......like power limiter which destroys the cards at the end of the turn' date=' but thanks again for the help :)[/quote'] That's exactly what I meant. But then, your card would be pretty much the same thing, so your going to need to make it unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barb00ch Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 lol i tweaked it a bit, and made it unique....plus fixed the card errors hopefully lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Ankku looks alot like an Archfiend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gil2m Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Ankku looks alot like an Archfiendyour right but still 9/10 for 1st and 7/10 for second Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 They are really good! I am impressed usually 1st cards are just terrible. There are some errors, but all in all great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barb00ch Posted June 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 thank you for all the helpful comments :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Ankku needs to have slightly higher atk or a lower level 100 pt gain isn't very much you know 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted June 26, 2009 Report Share Posted June 26, 2009 Increase the point gain to at least 200,and decrease it's level by 1 star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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