Heaven and Hell (IN PROGRESS!)

[treand]

Ok. I have made a small set, its my first one, so what do you guys think. Its really pretty small. Here.

This card is only summoned with a tribute of Delas, The Imperial Angel, and Sustaining Dark Being. This card must always remain in Attack postion. This card cannot attack or be attacked. THis card can equip to Grim Reaper -Grogg, and transfer its ATK and DEF to him. After 5 Turns, this card is no longer equip to Grim Reaper -Grogg, and can roll a six-sided die. If it comes up 1,2,or,3, destroy all monsters on your opponents field, if it comes up 4,or 5, destroy all spells. If it comes up 6, destroy this card. If this card is destroyed, you can bring it back to the field with half its original ATK and DEF.

This card can only be summoned by removing from play all cards in your hand, graveyard, on your side of the field, and fusion deck. This card is not destroyable by battle, spells or traps, or monster effects. This card is given a 500 ATK Boost for every demon removed from play, in your oppenents graveyard, and on the field. If this card is accompanied by the card "Angle of Death", it can attack your opponents Life points directly.

Description:This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of Balance of the Heavens. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle, spell, or traps effects. When this card is successfully summoned, you can pick 4 cards from your deck, and place them on the field as a special summon, or you may restore 1000 Life points for every card on the field to you. If any of the requirements for the summon spell "Sacrament to the Heavens" is not met at any time, this card is destroyed. Also if this card shares the field with Kurthar, The Master Wraith, both cards are destroyed.

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of Tribune of the Master Wraith. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle, spell, or traps effects. When this card is successfully summoned, you can pick 5 cards from your deck, and shuffle your deck, or you make do direct damage to your oppenet this turn. If any of the requirements for the summon spell "Tribune of the Master Wraith" are not met at any time, this card is destroyed. If this card shares the field with "Delas, The Imperial Angel, both cards are destroyed.

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[Spartan919]

Better, but I think you need to look around at other people's cards, and see what they look like.

[.:YuGiOh Freak:.]

those are some cool cards i give it 9.5/10

[DeREVOLUTION]

The cards are very nice. Only thing i would change is to use REAL types

[Altyrell]

--The "win" effect on the "Balance of the Heavens" card is... BROKEN BEYOND BELIEF

--The Dice Effect on the Angel of Death needs to have DRAW Backs to your, like 1/3/5 destroy opponents field and 2/4/6 your field is destroyed.

--The attack directly part of Grimm is broken considering the Attack BOOST it can get

--Dela's should have a way to be destroyed

--Kurthur ALSO needs a way to be destroyed

--Trap of Heaven and Hell is broken, half of the effects

--Remove the Last part of "Tribune of the Master Wraith" and where are you Removing the Exodia pieces from?

--not going to even talk about the broken defense of the Sustaining Dark Beginning

[devon1]

nice