ihop Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 This is a Gemini i have made.Please rate and fix OCG if it needs it.Card Lore:This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:-When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points you can Special Summon one Gemini monster in face- up attack position from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Pretty good. i) Overused pic (plus crop it)ii) The first part of the effect is fine since it's the same for all Geminisiii) Second part:'... - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your hand in [insert Battle Position here].'iv) You don't need the last part since it's a Gemini. Quite good, just fix the above and it should be fine. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superexex Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Cool Pic and good effect. OCG is not the best but OK, just a few errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted June 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Pretty good. i) Overused pic (plus crop it)ii) The first part of the effect is fine since it's the same for all Geminisiii) Second part:'... - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent' date=' Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your hand in [i'][insert Battle Position here][/i].'iv) You don't need the last part since it's a Gemini. Quite good, just fix the above and it should be fine. 8/10Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 Pretty good. i) Overused pic (plus crop it)ii) The first part of the effect is fine since it's the same for all Geminisiii) Second part:'... - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent' date=' Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your hand in [i'][insert Battle Position here][/i].'iv) You don't need the last part since it's a Gemini. Quite good, just fix the above and it should be fine. 8/10Thank you You're welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 28, 2009 Report Share Posted June 28, 2009 effect is good (but a little simple), OCG and pic are fine 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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