A Gemini!

[ihop]

This is a Gemini i have made.

Please rate and fix OCG if it needs it.

Card Lore:

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

-When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points you can Special Summon one Gemini monster in face- up attack position from your hand.

[Max Darkness]

Pretty good.

 

i) Overused pic (plus crop it)

ii) The first part of the effect is fine since it's the same for all Geminis

iii) Second part:

'... - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your hand in [insert Battle Position here].'

iv) You don't need the last part since it's a Gemini.

 

Quite good, just fix the above and it should be fine.

 

8/10

[superexex]

Cool Pic and good effect. OCG is not the best but OK, just a few errors.

[ihop]

Pretty good.

 

i) Overused pic (plus crop it)

ii) The first part of the effect is fine since it's the same for all Geminis

iii) Second part:

'... - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent' date=' Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your hand in [i'][insert Battle Position here][/i].'

iv) You don't need the last part since it's a Gemini.

 

Quite good, just fix the above and it should be fine.

 

8/10

Thank you

[Max Darkness]

Pretty good.

 

i) Overused pic (plus crop it)

ii) The first part of the effect is fine since it's the same for all Geminis

iii) Second part:

'... - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent' date=' Special Summon 1 Gemini Monster from your hand in [i'][insert Battle Position here][/i].'

iv) You don't need the last part since it's a Gemini.

 

Quite good, just fix the above and it should be fine.

 

8/10

Thank you

 

You're welcome

[ragnarok1945]

effect is good (but a little simple), OCG and pic are fine

 

8.5/10