9 new cards

[demcro]

Hi all,its me again :D.Today i'm gonna show you my 9 new cards.I worked hard on them,so I hope you will like them :)

Ancient Melody

Reduces monster's ATK or DEF by 600 points.

 

Book of spells

Negates effect of all spell and trap cards for 5 turns.

 

Coin of luck

Flip a coin.If it is:

-Heads:Oponents LP are reduced in half

-Tails:You're LP are reduced in half

 

Dark dragon

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Negates the effect of all spell cards.During Battle Phase,by sacrifising 350 LP it can attack twice.

 

Desperate call

For every monster you remove from play you gain 200 LP.

 

Dragon shield

For every Dragon type mosnter on the field Dragon shield's DEF is increased by 150 points.

 

Mithical bird

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

For every monster in you're graveyard it's ATK & DEF is increased by 1000.By sacrifising 1 monster you can destroy 2 oponent's monsters or reduce he's LP by 1000.

 

The headless horseman

1 Headless knight + 1 Dark horse

You can special summon 1 headless knight and 1 dark horse.Sacrifise 400 LP to attack oponent's LP directly.

 

Dark horse

A fearcefull horse,that destroys everything in its way.

[Angel of Silence]

OCG isn't the best and some pics could be better. 6.5/10

[Max Darkness]

Not bad for a Newbie, let me give you a few pointers:

 

Ancient Melody

i) Given the effect, you could call it 'Soothing Melody'

ii) You could change the effect to this:

Equip only to a monster on your opponent's side of the field. The equipped monster loses 600 ATK or DEF. If the equipped monster's ATK or DEF is reduced to 0 by this card's effect [insert killer extra bit here].

 

Book of Spells

i) Could change the name to 'Arcane Magic'

ii) OCG:

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can activate Spell or Trap Cards. The effects of all face-up Spell and Trap Cards are negated, except this card.

 

Coin of Luck

i) Could change the name to 'Lucky Coin/Dime'

ii) OCG:

Toss a coin and call Heads or Tails. If you call it right, your opponent's Life Points are reduced to half. If you call it wrong, your own Life Points are reduced to half.

 

Dark Dragon

i) ...So overdone it isn't true. Change the name and picture.

ii) Also quite overpowered.

 

Desperate Call

i) Image doesn't really fit the name.

ii) Not sure about the effect. Because if it's supposed to be a continuous/field spell card, then it's alright; but if it's not, then you need to specify how many monsters are removed from play.

 

Dragon Shield

i) Since this is an effect version of "Millennium Shield", I'd increase it to Lv.6

ii) Surely it would be a Warrior, Machine or Dragon-Type; not Psychic?

iii) OCG:

This card gains 150 DEF for every face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field.

 

Mithical Bird

i) 'Mithical' = 'Mythical'

ii) Very overpowered.

iii) Change the ATK/DEF to '?' and the effect to this:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card x 1000. Once per turn, during your End Phase, you can Tribute 1 face-up monster on your side of the field to destroy 2 monsters on your opponent's side of the field. If you do, this card loses 750 ATK.

 

The Headless Horseman

i) Capitalise names

ii) Overpowered

iii) Change the effect to this:

"Headless Knight" + "Dark Horse"

When this card is Fusion Summoned, Special Summon the 2 monsters used as Fusion Materials. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 of the monsters summoned by this card's effect. If you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Tributed monster's original ATK.

 

Dark Horse

i) Give it an effect

 

Overall, pretty good for a New Member

 

7/10

[demcro]

I get you're point darkstar.Ill work harder on the pics next time I'm creating a card :)

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Thank you for you're pointers Max.I will work harden on the next one's and I don't think,that all monster's should be with an effect :).