legofreak098 Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 take away the evil one this is a kid site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted June 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 I have changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 These are alright, although they don't seem to go together...there's no link if you see what I mean. Plus the effects need some work, as some of them are too basic or overpowered.For example, Ann's effect doesn't really work as a Flip effect ('Flip' = 'FLIP'). What it could be is "FLIP: Reduce the ATK of 1 face-up monster by 500." 'game' = 'Duel' There are also a large number of OCG errors, so work on them. And making these cards work together, if they're going to be a set. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 Not the best cards. Like Max darkness said. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted June 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 lol btw guys im sorry, my friend got onto this when I was away and made these cards, I changed some things but once again OCG isnt my strong point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 lol btw guys im sorry' date=' my friend got onto this when I was away and made these cards, I changed some things but once again OCG isnt my strong point.[/quote'] Don't apoligise. If these are going to be a set, then just change the effects so that they work together better, you can correct the OCG later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 The Dead One seems to have too simple of an effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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