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Lil Jevans

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Hey, I got bored and decided to make some cards. I haven't made any in a while so I may be rusty.
Please tell me what you think and how I could improve.

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[spoiler=Card effect]Once per turn you can sacrifice 1 monster on your field to deal 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card was to be destroyed by battle, you can sacrifice 1 monster on your field to keep this card on the field. [/spoiler]

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[spoiler=Card effect]When this card battles a Fiend-type monster, this card gains 500 ATK during the Battle Phase but if this card attacks a Fairy-type monster it loses 500 ATK during the Battle Phase. If there is a 'Fallen Angel - David' on the field this card cannot attack any monster on the field other than 'Fallen Angel - David'.[/spoiler]

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[spoiler=Card effect]When there is another card with 'Angel' in it's name, this card can attack twice in the same turn. If this card is sent to the Graveyard except by the result of battle, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a Level-4 or lower Fairy-type monster from your hand.[/spoiler]

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[spoiler=Card effect]When this card is successfully Special Summoned to the field you gain 1000 Life Points. When this card is in the Graveyard when your opponent attack's you directly you can remove this card from play to negate your opponent's attack.[/spoiler]

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I may add more cards depending on how these go.
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Very nice, but I think I've spotted some OCG errors:

 

David

'sacrifice' = 'Tribute'

'your field' = 'your side of the field'

Last part of the first card:

'If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you do, this card is not destroyed.'

 

Amelia

'Fiend-type' = 'Fiend-Type'

'Battle Phase' = 'Damage Step only' (See Steamroid for full details)

The last part of the effect is worded incorrectly, but I'm not sure how to fix it.

 

Jeremiah

First part of the effect:

'While there is another face-up "Angel" monster on the field...'

'by the result of battle' = 'by battle'

'Level-4' = 'Level 4'

 

Other than those, these are well done and quite nice. Upload some more would you? (Keep using Bibilical names)

 

8/10

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