"The One" set, (need checked)

[legofreak098]

 

[spoiler=Ezlith- The Forgotten One]"Ragnor-The Dead One" + "Sheeva-The Hunting One"

This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type. When this card battles, during the Damage Step pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 500) to have this card gain that much ATK, until the End Phase. If you do not, this card loses 500 ATK until your opponent's End Phase.

 

[ragnarok1945]

most effects are a little too simple, but practical

 

7.9/10

[legofreak098]

thanks, I also if you see OCG errors please list them for the card so I know what I have to fix

[Max Darkness]

Ann

Fine

 

Elyk

i) Lower the DEF a little

ii) 'warrior' = 'Warrior'

iii) 'game' = 'Duel'

iv) I'd change the effect to make it more useable.

 

Nareik

i) 'warrior' = 'Warrior'

ii) OCG: When a Trap Card designates this card, you can pay 300 Life Points. If you do, negate the effect and destroy the card.

iii) Lower the ATK a bit to around 1700

 

Ragnor

i) Crop the pic to remove the border

ii) 'zombie' = 'Zombie'

iii) Rather basic effect

iv) OCG: Each time this card attacks your opponent directly, you can draw 1 card.

 

Sheeva

i) Make it a Lv.7

ii) Very basic effect for its level

iii) OCG:

FLIP: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

 

Slipright

i) You could increase to Lv.8 and expand the effect

ii) OCG:

"Ann-The Kind One" + "Nareik-The Lost One"

You can negate the effects of Spell and Trap Cards that designate this card.

 

Ezlith

i) Very basic effect, and 100 LP isn't that much; here's a suggestion:

ii) OCG:

"Ragnor-The Dead One" + "Sheeva-The Hunting One"

This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type. When this card battles, during the Damage Step pay Life Points in multiples of 100 (max. 500) to have this card gain that much ATK, until the End Phase. If you do not, this card loses 500 ATK until your opponent's End Phase.

ATK: 3000 DEF: 1200 (It's a Zombie after all = Low DEF)

 

Those are your errors

 

Note to Icy: I was asked to point out the OCG errors.

[legofreak098]

Wow, THANKS!!!! I can now fix it and btw I DID ask so I yea, thanks

[gil2m]

there good

[legofreak098]

Woot, I have edited em and im rather pleased with my self

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Ok, im done with that editing and they look SO much better!