CrazyClockwork Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 This is some card i made :P i know there is writting error dont reply for that please.[/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img][/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrenTenkage Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted June 29, 2009 Report Share Posted June 29, 2009 If you're gonna make fake-types (which you shouldn't) at least make them Mascot-Type or something. Library=DeckSince when is it called a library!? Do not use "may", use "can". Do not use "gain" or "gets" for ATK increases. Use "increase". For example, "Increase the attack of this card by 1000". "Put it into" should be replaced with "add it to". Overall, not too bad for a beginner. It's actually a unique idea, and they're not Joke Cards either. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyClockwork Posted June 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 sorry for the wordchanging....i been a magic the gathering player for so much year :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 cool concept. thanks for not making these OPed joke cards. effects are ok and the pics look nice. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 Awkward but nice 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 Better then i expected. Though here are the flaws -Fake Types-some OCG errors-Bad and Blurry pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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