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If you're gonna make fake-types (which you shouldn't) at least make them Mascot-Type or something.



Since when is it called a library!?


Do not use "may", use "can". Do not use "gain" or "gets" for ATK increases. Use "increase". For example, "Increase the attack of this card by 1000".


"Put it into" should be replaced with "add it to".


Overall, not too bad for a beginner. It's actually a unique idea, and they're not Joke Cards either.



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