Baragan Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 goof cards. a tittle ocg on necro-angel overall: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 These aren't badly drawn, but I don't think they go well with the names/effects. I mean, these both look like they would be Machine-Type monsters that are also treated as Fairy-Type monsters.Also, the first one I would attribute to being an EARTH monster, not a LIGHT monster (also the name Flare Angel kinda implies FIRE). The second one I would think would be a WIND monster, not LIGHT (plus the name implies DARK).A 'Flare Angel' in my opinion would be armed with red/orange armour and wield a flaming sword; not a red-black one as in the picture. A 'Necro Angel' would be dressed in rusting black/grey armour, wielding a scythe or demonic sword, to imply death.At the moment, these look like 'Slice Angel' (the large sword and blade-like wings) and 'Blitz Angel' (looks like it would be jet-powered). So, I'd rethink the names and/or come up with new images. As for the effects; 1st CardWhen this card is destroyed by a Card Effect (Be more specific) and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy 1 face-up Level 6 or lower monster on the field. (Otherwise it's overpowered) 2nd CardOverpowered at the moment, try this: Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Tribute 1 Level 3 or lower Fairy-Type monster. If you do, this card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster's original ATK until your End Phase. Work on these. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted June 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 thanks for your help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 goof cards. a tittle ocg on necro-angel overall: 8/10 LOL you said tittle they are alright for various reasons 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted June 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 but I like 'Fairy' better,because these are Angels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 30, 2009 Report Share Posted June 30, 2009 but I like 'Fairy' better' date='because these are Angels.[/quote'] Yes, but they look like mechanisied angels, so they would be machine-type monsters treated as fairy-type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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