Rideouter Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Card Lore: This monster can attack your opponents Life Points directly. During your End Phase remove from play the top 4 cards of your Deck. Card Lore: If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. During your End Phase remove from play the top 4 cards of your Deck. Inlfict dmage to your opponent fro each dark monster that is sent by this effect, x300. Card Lore: You can remove from play the top 2 cards from your deck in order to Special Summon 1 "Necro Fade" monster that is removed from play. Card Lore: This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned when it is removed from play by a "Nevcro Fade" monster effect. Card Lore: When this monster is Tribute Summoned you can remove from play up to 2 cards from your hand. Card Lore: If this monster were to be destroyed by battle you can remove from play the top 3 cards of your Deck to prevent it from being destroyed. (Damage calculation is still applied.) Card Lore: When this monster is destroyed by battle you can remove from play the top 5 cards of your deck to Special Summon it back to your side of the field. Card Lore: When this monster is Tribute Summoned return up to 3 cards that are removed from play back to your Deck. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another "Necro Fade" monster you control instead. Card Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having 5 or more "Necro Fade" monsters with different names that are removed from play. You can pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all other cards on the field and Special Summon 2 "Necro Fade" monsters that are removed from play onto your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Guardian is spelt wrong.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Ok thanks i fixed it. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 All cards pics are terrible. They need backgrounds and need to be visable not blurred :[ Card #1- It doesnt need a drawback like that in its effect. Just lower the attack to like 1100 and give it another effect. Card #2- dark=DARK and you misspelt Damage and Inflict o-o and for!!! geez lols but you prob typed fast. the removing cards thing is to overwhelming lower the amount to like 2 if you really want to keep it which Im not sure y you would Card #3- deck = Deck. And now i see why you made it so high lol but still lower the removal for all other cards to 3 or 2. Card #4- Looks like a Fiend-Type to me =/ lols u spelled Nerco wrong x3 and it should be a lvl 4 atleast its OP if its a lvl 3 and give it another effect so far all effects are boring :[ Card #5- effect = BORING!!!!! add another Card #6- Its name is to cllose to Fay D. Flourite's Dark Ruin Beast- Terror Fiend >> but watev effect is a tad OP and boring Card #7- improper wording and OP effect. deck = Deck Card #8- again BORING EFFECT!!! you need to learn varity. Card #9- only a tad OP and boring effect overall. terrible effect due to boringness and nonvaritized. OCG altogether is good but not perfect ^^ i like the idea you just need major effect work because all are pretty much the same. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Thanks, ya i was going for a Dark attribute lightsworn set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 I thought so ^^ you can keep the remove effect part but add some other effects cause their boring right now @-@ but i still like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remove Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 few minor mistakes but over all pretty well balanced kind of 7.9/10. sadly you are probably going to run out of cards before this lore deck can do serious damage. the last guardian is a tad bit dangerous but seeing the 2000life point payment makes the card okay. he's probably going to be destroyed by a spell card before he can be used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Blind Archer and Scarred War Beast shouldn't remove up to 4 cards, it'll make it UPed on your deck. All your other Necro Fades that include card removing should all be reduced to just 1 card or it'll drain your deck too quickly 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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