.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Here it is. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters Return 3 monsters from the Graveyard to the owners respective Deck and send 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and this monster to the Graveyard. During the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated your opponent takes damage equal to half of the total ATK of both monsters. During the Battle Phase of your opponent's turn you can Summon 2 "Purify Egg Tokens" (Dragon/Light/2/ATK 1000/DEF 0) in Defense Position. You can only use this effect once in the Duel. Comment, Rate, and Tell Me If I Need To Change Something To Make It Fair And Balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 =/ cant read effect well post it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Blade Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 ^^ ditto. I could read the effect myself, but I want others to read it too. I see some OCG errors in there, and the name is good. So... umm... 8.30/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 8/10 Have some OCG errors and pic is used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 =/ cant read effect well post it Oh I'm sorry I added the effect. You should be able to see it now. ^^ ditto. I could read the effect myself' date=' but I want others to read it too. I see some OCG errors in there, and the name is good. So... umm... 8.30/10?[/quote'] I added the effect and Thank You. Do you think adding the two tokens, I call Purify Eggs, is a bit much or no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Blade Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 No, not at all. After all, 1000 and 0 stats aren't that strong anyway. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 I have seen the pic so often...7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Ok OCG fix time : "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monstersReturn 3 monsters from the Graveyard to the owners respective Deck and send 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and this monster to the Graveyard. During the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated your opponent takes damage equal to half of the total ATK of both monsters. During the Battle Phase of your opponent's turn you can Summon 2 "Purify Eggs" (ATK/1000 DEF/0) in Defense Position. You can only use this effect once in the Duel." Take out that (ATK/1000 DEF/0) part and just make the Purify Eggs card and post it otherwise change the effect to say "Summon 2 "Purify Egg Tokens" (type-Type/attribute/Level?/ATK 1000/DEF 0)" I guess its pretty balanced, your OCG is ok, but the pic I hate due to overuse but im not holding that against you. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Thank you I'll make the changes right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 god job but overused pic small OCG error 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 pic is overused, but the effect is quite balanced 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Pic is overused but 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 d: its perfect now 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skytin Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 -Good pic-Nice effect-OCG is ok.-Pic is a bit overused 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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