Enrise Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 [align=center] Please criticize about my work please, I wish to better as possible. I hope you enjoy the growing set of Horrific Creations. There will be GFX made soon with this set, including Boosters, Tins, Game Mat, and Structure Deck. Attributes were made by LiAM And now, Ladies and Gentlemen, I am proud to present my latest set: Horrific Creations[spoiler=Monsters]Horrific Creation - ElementumLore:This card cannot be Summoned except by removing 1 LIGHT, 1 DARK, 1 FIRE, 1 WATER, 1 EARTH, and 1 WIND monster from your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned, you may discard your entire hand to destroy all cards on the field except this card. This card cannot be targeted by Spell, Trap, or Monster effects. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the amount of monster removed from play x600.Image: Father Wolf Horrific Creation - XanthLore:This card cannot be Summoned except by removing from play 5 or more Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains ATK equal to the number of monsters removed x500. When this card is targeted by a Card Effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the activation of the card and destroy it. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it during your opponent's Standby Phase.Image: Father Wolf Horrific Creation - DracianLore:This card cannot be Summoned except by Tributing 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster you control. This card gains ATK equal to the amount of DARK and LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x500. If your opponent has more monsters on their side of the field, this card can attack twice in a row. If this card becomes a target of either a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect, you can discard one card to negate and destroy it. When this card is destroyed, you may return it to your hand.Image: Father Wolf Horrific Creation - OuroborosLore:This card cannot be Summoned except by Tributing 3 Serpent-Type monsters. As long this card remains face up on the field, this card cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage Calculation is applied normally). When this card attacks or is attacked, you gain Life Points equal the ATK of the attacking monster.Image: Photobucket Horrific Creation - The CollectorThis card can only be Summoned by Tributing 3 Psychic-type monsters from your side of the field. You can pay 1000 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by 3000. When this card is targeted by a Spell or Trap Card, you can discard one card to negate and destroy the card. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle (Damage calculation is applied normally).Image: Keith Thompson Art (http://www.keiththompsonart.com/index.html) Horrific Creation - Angel of Vengeance Lore:This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster. This card cannot be Summoned except by Tributing 1 Fiend-Type monster and 1 Fairy-Type monster. When this card is Summoned successfully, you can place 1 "Horrific Creation" monster from your deck into your hand, and destroy one face up "Horrific Creation" monster on your side of the field.Image: Keith Thompson Art New: Japanese Card (Comes with English translation)Translation:Horrific Creation - The ForgiverFairy / EffectDARKLore:This card cannot be Summoned except by Releasing 3 face-up LIGHT Fairy-Type monsters on your side of the Field. This card is also treated as a LIGHT monster. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the amount of LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard x1000. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you're opponent cannot attack another monster. Every time a Spell card is played, decrease the ATK of this card by 500.Image: Father Wolf Image: lizoozil on DeviantART Image: lizoozil on DeviantART Image: Edenknight on DeviantART Image: Scott M. Fischer - MTG Staples [spoiler=Spells]Lore:As long as this card remains on the field, any monster who's original ATK and DEF is 0 cannot be destroyed by battle. During your Main Phase, you may discard any number of cards from your hand, and based on the number of cards discarded, activate the following effect:1-2: All FIRE and WATER Attribute monsters cannot attack until your next Standby Phase.3-4: All EARTH and WIND Attribute monsters battle position is switched until your next Standby Phase.5-6: No monster can attack and their battle positions are switched until your next Standby Phase.This card cannot be destroyed by Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect.Image: Keith Thompson Art Image: John Avon - MTG Staples Image: John Avon - MTG Staples [spoiler=Traps] Image: Jason Engle - DeviantART Image: Jon Foster - MTG Staples ~Lucifer~ [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 The first card is UP and not worth the cost. The second and third card seems to copy each other a bit. All the cards are UP >.> none of them are useful and the psychic doesn't really follow what psychics monsters are. Psychic monster revolve around LP for their cost or increasing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Thanks for information. I'm entirely used to Psychic monsters.But I can only think of the only way the 2nd and 3rd copy a bit, is by gaining ATK from DARK, since Fiends are mainly DARK. That's it.I'll change right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 great! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 great! 9/10 I supposed I should've add this to the first post.Please criticize my cards in any way that needs fixing, how else can I get better at card making? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 i do not like the pic for the oboras but ok cards 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 i do not like the pic for the oboras but ok cards 8.9/10 What is an oboras? You mean Ouroboros? Do you even know what the Ouroboros is?Oh, and effect edit on the cards Mirage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Psychic is spelled wrong on the Attribute of the last card. You might want to have that fixed. =/ Other than than, they're good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Psychic is spelled wrong on the Attribute of the last card. You might want to have that fixed. =/ Other than than' date=' they're good. 9/10[/quote'] Well, technically, that's LiAM's fault, not mine really.But please, do explain how these could be better in your opinion. If you think they need fixing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Elementum needs more power. The summoning requirement for it is too much, effect not powerful enough 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Elementum needs more power. The summoning requirement for it is too much' date=' effect not powerful enough 8/10[/quote'] How? It removes 1 monster from each of the Six main Attributes in the grave for summon, and it has a field nuke, can't be targeted by Spell, Trap, or Monster Effects, and gains ATK and DEF by 600 for every removed monster. That is at least 3600 ATK and DEF.In my opinion, that is the most is should go over <_< Unless I should remove the field nuke for a can't be destroyed by battle effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 BUMP, 2 new cards added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 The cards are awesome, although, on the Japanese card, when you are designing the name to make it silver, when you pick the pattern above the dropdown box with the patterns in it I would suggest you lower the opacity to about 55% - 65% Great cards. Is the JP card your first Attempt? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Yes, actually the JP one was my first attempt. And thanks, I'll see that I'll make better holo names in the future with that advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 this monsters are UP so raise there ATK or give them more or Better effects. the pics are good. i like the fact that you created your own types. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 this monsters are UP so raise there ATK or give them more or Better effects. the pics are good. i like the fact that you created your own types. 7.5/10 1: Which cards are Under powered. How the hell am I supposed to know which ones to fix if I have no idea which is UP. Also, you said "this monsters are" o_O 2: If you meant Attributes instead of Types, then look again. These are LiAM's Attributes, I merely gave him credit for using them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Yes' date=' actually the JP one was my first attempt. And thanks, I'll see that I'll make better holo names in the future with that advice.[/quote'] okay good luck,and its a brilliant first attempt. Mine was suckish, but now, mine are great. If you want to know how to change the colour of the holo to gold, red, green etc. just PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 Will do. C'mon, are there any others that wish to comment on this thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthus Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 awesome pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted July 5, 2009 Report Share Posted July 5, 2009 wow. 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Please criticize about my work please' date=' I wish to better as possible.[/quote'] Please do so Darthus and Madara. However, I do appreciate the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 8/10(Good ocg) 20%/ 20(Not quite pics) 60%/ 50(can be better)(good efects) 20% / 10% (I give so much priority to the pics, but, its still ok, try to get better art, realism, backgrounds, battle shows, are the most hard to find in this world) (i got my siggy pic after 2 days of seekin) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 8/10(Good ocg) 20%/ 20(Not quite pics) 60%/ 50(can be better)(good efects) 20% / 10% (I give so much priority to the pics' date=' but, its still ok, try to get better art, realism, backgrounds, battle shows, are the most hard to find in this world) (i got my siggy pic after 2 days of seekin)[/quote'] <_< Okay, so what arts need changing if you are so kind enough to say what pics need changing. And I can barely understand your system. It's unorganized in my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Wow. 11/10 & how do you make custom attributes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Wow. 11/10 & how do you make custom attributes? <_<? Um, at least read the entire post, and literally, the entire post, 1st to last, and you will know your answer about the attributes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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