.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 The 2nd Dragon in my own line of 5 Dragons. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersIf this monster would be destroyed by battle, the controller of this card can remove it from play to end the Battle Phase and put a "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking monster. Monsters lose 800 ATK and DEF for each "Vanishing Counter" it has on it. If the Monsters ATK and DEF reaches 0 by this effect, remove it from play. Rate & Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 that's weird OCG, not sure what the right way is effect is also weird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altyrell Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 you might want to also change the Set ID... "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersIf this monster would be destroyed by battle, the controller of this card can remove it from play to end the Battle Phase and put a "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking monster. Monsters lose 800 ATK and DEF for each "Vanishing Counter" it has on it. If the Monsters ATK and DEF reaches 0 by this effect, remove them from play." slightly better OCG correction and cleaning up of the confusing effect.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Incredibly wierd effect and OCG, use Altyrell's OCG fix. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 K Editing now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersIf this monster would be destroyed by battle, the controller of this card can remove it from play to end the Battle Phase and put 1 "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking monster. Monsters lose 800 ATK and DEF for each "Vanishing Counter" it has on it. If the Monsters ATK and DEF reaches 0 by this effect, remove them from play." I took this from Altyrell. I only changed "a" to "1". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axoren Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Them should be it, iirc. (remove it from play) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altyrell Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 If this monster would be destroyed by battle, the controller of this card can remove it from play to end the Battle Phase and put a "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking monster.*snipped ending* Once per turn, if this monster is selected as an attack target, the controller of this card can negate the attack and place a "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 weird but cool 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Metal Militia:. Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Different.I like it.Minor OCG error, but nice.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 The effect is extremely unique, and I think it is awesome. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
40 Card Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 [align=center]Effect's kinda like Venom Swamp. o_O Anyway, here is your rating from me: Name: 8/10Pic: 9/10Effect: 9.5/10OPed or UPed: 8.5/10Overall: 35/40General: 8.5/10 Pretty good card and OCG. But it's kinda peculiar. Lol. I just said an old people word. Peculiar. Does that sound so old person to you? Anyway, don't wanna be spamming. Your card is sweet. :)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 If this monster would be destroyed by battle' date=' the controller of this card can remove it from play to end the Battle Phase and put a "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking monster.*snipped ending* Once per turn, if this monster is selected as an attack target, the controller of this card can negate the attack and place a "Vanishing Counter" on the attacking Monster. [/quote'] I made it like that because whenever i get around to it I would make a follow up card to make a sweet combo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 7/10 Nice picture, name corresponds with effect, very balanced, nice effecta good ocg correction is added i see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Very creative I think you should continue making more of these. Pic is epic. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:*Cyber~KaiserX*:. Posted July 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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