{40 Card} Aqua Creature Seibutsu [Recolored! Credit goes to SirBigC94]

[40 Card]

Hey everybody. I'm new here, and this is my first card. I know the pic isn't so great, so yeah. If someone can find any OCG errors, please say so. Thx. :)

Aqua Creature Seibutsu

Aqua Creature Seibutsu

 

Recolor by SirBigC94.

 

[align=center]Effect: This card's Type is also treated as Sea Serpent. Once per turn, you can Tribute 2 WATER monsters on your side of the field, to destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack this turn.

 

Recolor credit goes to SirBigC94. Thx dude. :)[/align]

[lknpk15]

Okay. A little advice for the first sentence. It should go like this:

"This card is also treated as a Sea Serpent-Type monster."

Other than that and a grammatical error, it's good. 8/10

[40 Card]

Oops. I thought I new what I was doing. I'm pretty experienced with Yu-Gi-Oh!, and I can't believe I didn't catch that. Thx. I'll be sure to change it. :)

[ragnarok1945]

almost seems slightly underpowered to lose 2 water monsters to destroy 1 of your opponent's monsters

 

8.5/10

[Angel of Silence]

It's a little UP'd. The pic could be better to. 8.5/10

[40 Card]

Thx guys. I couldn't really find a better pic. Well I could've, but they either had borders or sigs in 'em.

[-Stoner-™]

Here's the OCG Fix, then the card ratings:

 

OCG Fix:

 

This card's Type is also treated as Sea Serpent-Type monster. Once per turn, you can Release 2 WATER monsters you control, to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack this turn.

 

Ratings:

 

Name - 7/10.

Pic - 5/10.

Effect - 8/10.

Total - 20/30.