papi17 Posted July 2, 2009 Report Share Posted July 2, 2009 Yea Sorry about the first one The pics are kinda blurry yea and the effects need work but thats why your hereComment and rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axoren Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 Yea Sorry about the first one The pics are kinda blurry yea and the effects need work but thats why your here *cards that should be wrapped in tags here* First one poses a OCG problem and it's eternal on the field. Also, it should be 8 because 8 / 2 = 4, 4 / 2 = 2, and 2 / 2 = 1. As a 6 star, 6 / 2 = 3, and you can't evenly divide 3 by 2. You need to specify what they do if it's an odd number or if it's one. It should never stay on the field forever. The next three have unreadable effects, post them separately. Next one has bad OCG but the effect is decent. There are two not-so obvious OCG errors in your egg. The one that screams at me is that "one" should be "1". On the next one, "is" should be "remains" iirc, not sure about that. The next one's nearly perfect, you're just missing a comma after "battle". Fix -> "Special Summoned, add 1" I'm skimming over the rest, there is no "Salvation Dragon". A good percentage of those Synchro Monsters are unplayable now. And you posted the same card twice. You have no spell or trap cards to support these guys? That saddens me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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