[Dark]~Yasha Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Cloudhttp://aycu21.webshots.com/image/31900/2003966333624838279_rs.jpg Squallhttp://aycu04.webshots.com/image/32643/2004536647572100888_rs.jpg Sephiroth (my favorite one) http://aycu03.webshots.com/image/32082/2005824263758523239_rs.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 The card grammar could use some minor tweaking, and the cards a bit over powered. Other then that, a nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Dark]~Yasha Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 I don't think there's anything wrong with the card grammer and what do you expect it's frickin Cloud, Squall, and Sephiroth, they are powerful fighters. I never said they wouldn't be powerful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaitos Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Not perfect but shouldn't it be Sephiroth who should be destroyed for the Cloud card? so I'll rate it a 3/5 slightly over powered but good attempt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Shall we take it from the top then? Cloud: You don't need that whole first line. You can simply put "When "One Winged Angel - Sephiroth" is played onto the field, destroy this card."Sephiroth: The summoning effect is miss written. It should state "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK, Warrior-Type monsters from your Graveyard." As well as there's a difference between a powerful card, and an overpowered one. All three cards demonstrate horrible balancing, and over powering effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Dark]~Yasha Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 What your saying is basically the same thing that I put on the cards with some word differences. Why are you being so picky about it anyway? They're just for fun, and it's not like they're real cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Because you flat out argue that your card grammar is right, when it is proven to be flawed. Don't make an arguement, and insult another, when you are the one whom is wrong in the first place; specially when they were just trying to pass along some advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Dark]~Yasha Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 I agree with Kaitos, my mistake. Who's the "they" you speak of? You're the only one who has commented on my cards besides Kaitos... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 they, lose term used to discribe a group. I own a Club on here, designed to help out Card Makers. So, when I refer to 'they' I mean myself and my group. And it's alright man; just try not to be so quick on the defensive. Here, have some rep points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 i have hosted them for you-anyway improve the grammar and balance them a little and you will do just fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Dark]~Yasha Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Thanks. I should've made them more correctly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 your welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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