Try to beat this!

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I'll fix the OCG. But I want the pic link for The Duke of Fiends.

Demonic Knight Xiron- For each Fiend-Type monster on the field, increase the ATK of this card by 300.

Fiend's Sacrifice- When a face-up Fiend-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster.

Fiendish Retribution- This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 1 face-up Warrior-Type monster and you control no monsters. You can Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard.

The Duke of Fiends- As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up Fiend-Type monsters on the field by 600.

[Altyrell]

Another way to fix the OCG:

 

Xiron - Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each Fiend-Type monster on the Field.

 

Fiend's Sacrifice - When a Fiend-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, destroy the attacking monster before the Damage Step

 

Fiendish Retribution - This card can only be activated when your opponent controls a Warrior-Type monster. Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

The Duke - While this card is face-up, Increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up Fiend-Type monsters you control by 600.

 

Helmet - This can only be activated while you control a face-up "The Duke of Fiends". While this card is face-up, all face-up Fiend-Type monsters you control cannot be target by the efects of Spell Trap or Monster Effects. Increase the ATK and DEV of all Fiend-Type monsters by 200.

 

Names - 9/10

Pics - 8/10

Effect - 7/10

Total - 24/30

[-Stoner-™]

OCG Fixes:

 

[align=center]Demonic Knight Xiron

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Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each Fiend-Type monster on the Field.

 

Fiend's Sacrifice

 

hen a face-up Fiend-Type monster you control is selected as an attack target, negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster.

[align=center]

Fiendish Retribution[/align]

 

This card can only be activated when your opponent controls a Warrior-Type monster. Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

The Duke of Fiends

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up Fiend-Type monsters on the field by 600.

[align=center]

Helmet of the Forgotten King[/align]

 

This can only be activated while you control a face-up "The Duke of Fiends". While this card is face-up, all face-up Fiend-Type monsters you control cannot be target by the effects of Spell Trap or Monster Effects. Increase the ATK and DEF of all Fiend-Type monsters by 200.

 

Name - 6/10.

Pics - 5/10.

Effects - 7/10.

Total - 12/30.

 

 

I guess you like my way of rating, Altyrell?

[Mehmani]

There is no such thing as a Quick-Play Trap Card. Other than that, I think this is a fair attempt for a newbie. Have a look at the OCG Thread, it's stickied.

[Altyrell]

Father - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of the Ritual card "Father and Sun" Increase ATK of "Demonic Knight Xiron" and "Father of Xiron" by 300 for every Fiend-Type monster in either player's Graveyard

 

Father and Son - This card is used to Ritual Summon "Father of Xiron". This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Demonic Knight Xiron".

 

Go with SirBig's OCG on Fiend's Sacrifice, The Duke (either mine or SirBig's would work), and your {SirBig} rating seems simple

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There is no such thing as a Quick-Play Trap Card. Other than that' date=' I think this is a fair attempt for a newbie. Have a look at the OCG Thread, it's stickied.

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That be true, they are Counter Traps [relatively speaking, the "Quick-Plays" of trap cards...]

[-Stoner-™]

OCG Fixes:

 

Father of Xiron

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of the Ritual card "Father and Sun". Increase ATK of "Demonic Knight Xiron" and "Father of Xiron" by 300 for every Fiend-Type monster in either player's Graveyard.

 

Father and Son

 

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Father of Xiron". This card can only be activated if you control a face-up "Demonic Knight Xiron".

 

Names - 7/10.

Pics - 3/10.

Effects - 6/10.

Total - 16/30.

[ragnarok1945]

most effects are too simple, though the pics are great.

 

6/10

[darkassasain314]

i like the names, but a Trap Card can't be a Quick-Play, you should make it a Counter-Trap.

[ilikesharks2020]

Oh I already did.

 

Anyway OCG is bad.