Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 [align=center]After a long break I have gone back into card-making. I havn't made a card for ages so I'm a bit rusty on OCG. IMG Credit = Father WolfSpaceKnight, Warrior Of The Stars Card Lore:This card cannot be Summoned by the effect of a Spell Card. When this card is Advance Summoned you can inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Activation of this effect implies that you must draw 1 card. If the specified card is a Monster Type card, Special Summon it to your field in face-up Defense Position. When this card is Released to Summon a monster, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:● Destroy all monsters on your opponent's field.● inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 Great card. the OCG is nearly perfect from my view so no rust there. pic is great. effect is great. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 4, 2009 Report Share Posted July 4, 2009 I don't see any OCG errors, and picture and effect are both epic 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Thanks for the rates and comments guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Wow, really nice!I think these are the errors, but I'm not sure: 'Monster Type card' = 'Monster Card''Released' = 'Tributed' 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 not advance summon, tribute summon, yea I know where you've seen it written advance summon.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Sasuke XII Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 No OCG errors,and nice pic!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Wow' date=' really nice!I think these are the errors, but I'm not sure: 'Monster Type card' = 'Monster Card''Released' = 'Tributed' 9.5/10[/quote']in New OCG, it's actually Released but yeah, thanks anyway... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathchoice Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Amazing card! good work and keep it up! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Thank you for the rating and the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowsmacker Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 good card. i am not realy a fan of the whole 5 ds vocab like realease but i understand exacly what it means. 10/10 for ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Uh, thanks Cowsmacker....-_-I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Very nice! I just hate how small the text is. If that were a real card, nobody would be able to read it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Well, I made the effect long so the text is small... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Well' date=' I made the effect long so the text is small...[/quote'] Eh, yeah... Thanks? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[B.C.E.] Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Okay some OCG and those two bottom effects need some tuning. First I'd make it destroy only one monster because then people will always pick the first effect plus this card already inflicts 1000 points of damage so it doesn't make much sense. The "Activation of this effect implies that..." doesn't make any sense so I suggest removing that. Overall I suggest giving him a different effect that makes him a bit more unique. Good card but you need to rework it a bit to make it work. [This card cannot be Special Summoned by the effect of a Spell Card. If this card is Released, you can activate 1 of the following effects:● Destroy all monsters on your opponent's field.● inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.] Name: 8/10Pic: 8/10Effect: 3/10OCG: 2/10Playability: 2/10Overall: 46/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 all i want to say is 9/10 this is a nice try but i think the image don't look like space^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Well' date=' I made the effect long so the text is small...[/quote'] Eh, yeah... Thanks? ' pid='2534045' dateline='1247220272']Okay some OCG and those two bottom effects need some tuning. First I'd make it destroy only one monster because then people will always pick the first effect plus this card already inflicts 1000 points of damage so it doesn't make much sense. The "Activation of this effect implies that..." doesn't make any sense so I suggest removing that. Overall I suggest giving him a different effect that makes him a bit more unique. Good card but you need to rework it a bit to make it work. [This card cannot be Special Summoned by the effect of a Spell Card. If this card is Released' date= you can activate 1 of the following effects:● Destroy all monsters on your opponent's field.● inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.] Name: 8/10Pic: 8/10Effect: 3/10OCG: 2/10Playability: 2/10Overall: 46/100 Thanks both of you for the rates and comments. Updated first post with IMG Credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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