Earthbound Immortal Subterruxz Mihnocc rate it right now with a 10/10

[QuimicVital]

all fixed thanks to radiant f.u.r.y. Yuki_Minuzuka

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG errors um pic.....nice drawing. but doesnt fit the Earthboundness.

 

not very original effect i know that it has the normal effect that all EB's have but give it a better self effect.

 

6/10

[Altyrell]

Name - 6/10

Picture - 5/10 [good drawing, but needs to be.... brighter

Effect - 5/10 [good be better, not counting OCG errors]

Total 16/30

 

Once per turn, destroy up to 2 cards your opponent controls. For each card destroyed by this effect, increase the ATK of this card by 500

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Also =/ the effect is OP

[Rucario]

It's not OP'd, Lady Duelist. All Earthbounds are OP'd. And they are official. Don't say it's OP'd.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

:[ but they all dont have the ability to destory 2 cards on the opponent's field once per turn and gain 500 ATK for each destroyed card =/ thats OP even for an EB

[Altyrell]

it is ok lovely lady, but you are right, it is a bit OP... maybe if it was changed to "Releasing 2 cards you control"

[ragnarok1945]

effect is slightly on the OPed end, picture is bad

 

7/10

[QuimicVital]

I thaught that release was puting the card in the owner's hand.

[dead draw]

pic needs Nazca Lines NAO

[Angel of Silence]

Pic doesn't match an earthbound's the effect is slightly OP'd and there are OCG errors. 5/10

[QuimicVital]

bump

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

what animal is this?

[Καsτοr]

what animal is this?

 

Looks like bacteria' date=' which is NOT an animal.

 

As for the card. Too dark.

 

This card [i']wins[/i]? its gains.

 

wins- gains

released- Released/Tributed.

attack- ATK

 

 

It's OP'd. Horribly.

 

3/10.

[gil2m]

not one of your best

[QuimicVital]

It is a worm not a bactery is dark becuse it attacks underground and the colour of this card is purple i thagth that release was puting the card in the owners hand and all Earthbound Immortals are O'Ped

[Καsτοr]

True. But you have to fix the OCG errors. And. . . It doesn't really look like a worm from what I can see.

[QuimicVital]

It is because is a worm with arms and giant and very sharp teeths connected to the mouththen it is a worm the tail is at the bottom

[Καsτοr]

Ok, so it's not just a worm. It's a worm, with detached body parts. Ok, I see it now.

[RoseSymphony]

Umm... the picture doesn't match the background of the other Earthbound Immortals (for example see the tons of other EIs on this site). And another thing that baffles me is the phrase, "This card WINS 500 ATK..." I don't remember WINS being a part of YGO slang.

 

OCG needs a lot of work. The picture is only OK, but I'm not really sure what it's supposed to be and whether or not it's a real life Nazca Line. Also, just so you're made aware, the actual names of each immortal has something to do with its literal translation for the Quechua language. For example, "Ccarayhua" means "lizard" in Quechua, "Pisco" (Aslla PISCU) means "little bird", "Cusillu" means "monkey", and so forth. I've seen people just take a portion of the word and add a whole bunch of random letters on the end, but it ruins the authenticity.

 

I'll rate this a 4/10.

[Καsτοr]

Actually, Yuki. The name is something I did not know.

 

Anyways, I had already corrected all his OCG errors.

[QuimicVital]

I only put the name because subterruxz as subterrain and mihnocc because it sounds like an earthbound immortal

Can anyone fix my errors note release change it for puting the card in your hand and delete that of 500 points per released card

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. This card wins 500 attack for each card released during your turn. Once per turn release two cards in the opponent's field.

20 points for the one that makes the ocg perfect with the above details

[RoseSymphony]

I'm sorry if I sounded too harsh. I didn't mean it.

 

I believe this is the correct OCG.

 

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. *This card gains 500 ATK for each card destroyed during this turn. Once per turn, you can destroy up to 2 cards on the opponent's side of the field.

 

Instead of Tributing, I believe you mean destroy. You cannot release the opponent's cards unless it's for a special Tribute Summon, like Lava Golem.

[QuimicVital]

good,but i have some specifications like puting the card in the hand and removingthat of 500 points i f you make that you will get the points

[RoseSymphony]

Wait, what do you want me to do? Do you want to me to rewrite the effect (so sorry, I'm terrible with communicating. Just tell me specifically what you want me to do and I'll do it)?