gster321 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 K , here it is :) Pic credits go to : Beloved Creature from Deviant Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 I knew it was going to be that picture!! (I have a card called Imp Warrior with that pic myself) Anyway, there are some OCG errors, and you seem to get confused towards the end of the effect, but this is a nice idea. Good job. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gster321 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 lol thnks :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Pic is overused slightly but it fits (-1) Misspelled words such as Special and Defense (-1)OCG Errors (-2)OP (-4)12/20 OCG fix: "When this monster destroys a Level 5 monster, you can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck or hand in Defense Position." This card is OP since you can virtually repeatedly SS a monster every turn using this effect =/ you need drawback. Increase the ATK too or lower the level to lvl 5 and make it around 2000 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Pic is good, but some spelling and OCG errors. Good job! :) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gster321 Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 TY GUYS :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Good,but here are some things you may wanna fix.1.Defence should be defense.2.Speacial summon should be Special Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Good' date='but here are some things you may wanna fix.1.Defence should be [s']defense[/s]. No, it should be 'Defense' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Good' date='but here are some things you may wanna fix.1.Defence should be [s']defense[/s]. No, it should be 'Defense'Sorry bout that.Thanks for the correction max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Good' date='but here are some things you may wanna fix.1.Defence should be [s']defense[/s]. No, it should be 'Defense' Sorry bout that.Thanks for the correction max. You're welcome. Always glad to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pure.awesomeness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Pic is WAY overused. I used it, like 4 other people used it, you used it. Not really a card you would put as a single. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 seen the pic plenty of times over. Effect is good, though slightly OPed 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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