Tinjami Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 This is my first card. It is Angel of Darkness. I hope you like it. [spoiler=Card] [spoiler=Lore]This card can be Normal Summoned without Tribute. This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:● When this card is Summoned, discard two monsters on your side of the field. if you cannot, negate this card's effect. At the beginning of your turn, you can skip your Draw Phase to remove from play 1 card on the field. This card gains 200 ATK for each card removed from play be this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 This is pretty good! A few things: i) Monsters that can be summoned with less tributes than usual have a negative effect such as reduced ATK or limited lifespan. And I'm not sure you can have such an effect with a Gemini.ii) Turn this into an Effect Monster, since the effects will be better if it is one.iii) OCG errors: 'one...two' = '1...2' 'every' = 'each' Good for a New Member! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinjami Posted July 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SataroMiyaki Posted July 6, 2009 Report Share Posted July 6, 2009 very good 9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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