Matenaruto Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 this is my first card ever,rate it on a scale of 0 to 10 and please no negative comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 OCG fix: For every Dragon-type monster in both player's graveyards,this monster gains 300 ATK points. (Someone correct me if I am wrong).Also,8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Angel of Silence Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Graveyards is capital that's all you missed. Make the effect more creative and less normal. And I suggest that you don't make dragons mostly because everyone does. For your first card, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Phanax Leminer Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Aiku: Another dragon, like this site doesn't have enough of it. OCG: The OCG was fixed, so your points on that decreased.Effect: For a Dragon-type card, I wasn't expecting much of a super, awesome effect it's pretty much repeative at the end. Plus, it looks like a lot of the effect of the evolution of Red-Eyes Dragon for some hood reason.Image and Name: This pic isn't too much used on the site, but I'll have to say that I don'i like it. It's an ugly pic. BUt, it fit with the name enough. Overall: 6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Dont ask us not to comment negatively =/ we have a right to comment however we want. anyways:Another dragon. (-3)Card effect is boring (-1)Needs another effect (-1)Unoriginal (-2)OCG errors (-2)Slightly OP (-2)9/20 OCG fix: "Increase this monster's ATK by 300 for each Dragon-Type monster in each player's Graveyard."Boring and OP. Cut it to just your graveyard otherwise it has potential to get to atleast 4000. down the attack boost to...200. and increase the level by 1. Other then that its ok i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Necro Pheonix Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 thanksagreed, nice job for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 OCG fix: For every Dragon-type monster in both player's graveyards' date='this monster gains 300 ATK points. (Someone correct me if I am wrong).Also,8/10.[/quote'] For each Dragon-Type monster in both player's Graveyards, increase the ATK by 300 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Wolf Sif Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 ???Why dose Everyone make Dragons??? I think that the pic and effect could have been alot better and over all I give this card a 4/10Keep trying though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 WAY too simple effect, it needs another one. Also pic is unimpressive 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan and justin Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 fix the ocg. people are giving you corrections. so you should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zer0ic Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 be creative with your effects and not much left for me to say 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verdom Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 rate 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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