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Care for some OCG tips?

sacrifice-> Tribute

atk-> ATK

summon-> Summon

 

Most of your effect monsters are overpowered. Here's a few suggestions on how they could be worded (not telling you what to do, use or don't use my advice as you wish)

 

Baraka: When you Normal Summon, Flip Summon, or Special Summon this card, return 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand. (OR) When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard to the field in face-up Attack Mode.

 

Onaga is WAY over the top I'm afraid. If you want to keep his effect, it needs a big cost. I suggest "Once during your Main Phase you can discard your entire hand (minimum 3 cards). If you do, destroy all face-up monsters on your opponents side of the field who's ATK is lower then this cards.

 

Hope I've helped. I have no experience with syncros, but I can sense they need some work too. Can't wait to see what these cards look like with editing and a little TLC!

 

I'll give you an 8/10 for these.

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maybe put some effects on the fusion and synchro.

 

Onaga - Discard 3 Cards from Hand, Destroy 3 monster on your opponents side of the field.

 

Baraka - When this card is Summoned bring back 1 Dark-Type Monster from your Graveyard and return it to field in Attack Position.

 

hope that helped.. these cards are nice and simple xD

i like the pics xD

7/10

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maybe put some effects on the fusion and synchro.

 

Onaga - Discard 3 Cards from Hand' date=' Destroy 3 monster on your opponents side of the field.

 

Baraka - When this card is Summoned bring back 1 Dark-Type Monster from your Graveyard and return it to field in Attack Position.

 

hope that helped.. these cards are nice and simple xD

i like the pics xD

7/10

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... I just said the same thing, only with better OCG.

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How has no one pointed out that his Synchro monsters are not the way they should be, first off Scorpion and Sub-Zero have to be Tuner monsters and the Synchro's should read, for the Sub-Zero one "1 Sub-Zero + 1 non-Tuner monster" and for the Scorpion it should read "1 Scorpion + 1 non-Tuner monster".

So Please don't make card's if you don't know how they work.

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