HanuKazamushi Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 To use this card, you must discard 1 DARK monster card from your hand to be able to discard two cards from your opponents respective hand. Please tell me if there are any problems, I need to learn from my mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Ok pic terrible wording and OCG =/ OCG Fix:"Discard 1 DARK monster from your hand. Select and discard 2 random cards from your opponent's hand." Eh effect is to simple =/ add more to it. Bad OCG (-2)Bad Wording (-2)Simple Effect (-1)15/20good idea though ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 sorta bad... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HanuKazamushi Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 I kinda figured that I messed up alot on this card so hopefully I won't make the same mistake again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 you didnt mess up alot :[ and this card isnt bad! its just underpowered. just patch up the OCG and give it another effect and it'll be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HanuKazamushi Posted July 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Thanks for your help :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 OCG is really bad, though pic is good. Effect is too simple. Please give another one 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLUsion Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I like the picture and name, but I don't get how the effect is relative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I Guess Ur Japanese Like Me? (Just a Guess) OCG Errors and the Pic looks Likes a Kingdom Hearts Character 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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