Squirrel Girl Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Here is a card: Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by discarding your entire hand (exept this card). When this card attacks, this card gains 1000 ATK. When this card is destroyed, destroy 1 monster on your opponents side of the field. Comment PLZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoseSymphony Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 A couple of suggestions: 1) I would rethink the Summoning costs for her, as she seems a bit broken. You can play her first turn (normally not a smart move, but still...), or play her when you only have 1 card in your hand (excluding herself), which is even worse. 2) If you like her Summoning cost or prefer to keep them, simply get rid of the other effects. A 2500 ATK beatstick with the power to be Special Summoned simply by discarding a few cards is great, and much more balanced than your original. 3) Try cropping the picture a bit. You want to avoid the picture looking like it was crammed into the frame. Cropping the bottom of the dress is the best idea; people can tell it's a really fancy violet dress whether they see the bottom of it or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 I like the card...but it's OP. I'd get rid of the 1000 ATK boost. Otherwise, it's a good card. Well done! 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Sweet for a newbie, keep it up, this gets an 8/10 8)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Pic isn't the best. It's OP'd. OCG seems good though. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 Remove the 1000 atk boost and make it harder to special summon. Right now it's too powerful 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 good for a noob 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verdom Posted July 7, 2009 Report Share Posted July 7, 2009 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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