Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 Actual cards I am developping (post edited regularly).Don't forget, when the list change, to see them as images Dragon Zombie EX (Effect monster)Level 5DBC-021ZombieThis monster cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Dragon Zombie". If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon a "Dragon Zombie SP" from your hand.2100/0 Dragon Zombie SP (Effect Monster)Level 8DBC-022ZombieThis card can only Special Summoned by the effect of "Dragon Zombie EX". You may pay 4000 Life Points to destroy all the cards on the Field of your opponent. If you do, skip your Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, both players loses 2000 Life Points.2800/0 Cyara - Dark Beast Servant (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-023SpellcasterIf this card is equipped with "Dark Beasts Seal", you can Tribute this monster to Special Summon "Dark Beast Surai" or "Dark Beast Myara".1400/1000 Dark Beasts Seal (Equipment Spell)DBC-024This card can only equip a monster with "Dark Beast" in its name. The equipped monster raises its ATK and DEF by 300. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you may pay 1200 Life Points to return it in your hand. Thunder Dragon EX (Effect Monster)Level 6DBC-025ThunderThis monster cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Thunder Dragon". If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon a "Thunder Dragon SP" from your hand.2200/2100 Thunder Dragon SPLevel 8DBC-026ThunderThis card can only Special Summoned by the effect of "Thunder Dragon EX". You may pay 3500 Life Points to choose one of the following effects:- Destroy all your opponent's Monsters on his Field.- Destroy all tour opponent's Spell and Trap cards on his Field.If you do, skip your next two Draw Phases. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, both players lose 2500 Life Points.2800/2700 Link to comment
Deinonycus Posted November 9, 2007 Report Share Posted November 9, 2007 you should read real cards for help with your effects the way you have used them are terribe for example If your opponent Summons by Normal or Flip Summon a monster it should be If your opponent normal summons or flip summons a monster Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 My real cards are french, so it's a bit difficult to respect OCG ^^" !That's why I'm askin' for help. Anyway, thanks. I edited "Curse of the Dark Hedgehog". Next ideas: Guuzu Ishi (Effect Monster)EarthLevel 4CommonDBC-014RockDescription: If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, by paying 600 Life Points, this card returns in your hand.1300/2000 Hikari the Light Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-015FairyDescription: When this card is face-up on the Field, only LIGHT Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Yami the Dark Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-016Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only DARK Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your deck.1200/1200 Mizu the Aqua Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-017Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only WATER Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Honoo the Flame Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-018Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only FIRE Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Kaze the Wind Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-019Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only WIND Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Chi the Earth Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-020Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only EARTH Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 (The 6 last will be part of a series of combos like Eria, Hiita... with the only difference that there is ALL Attributes represented, not only the 4 elements. Note that their name is the exact translation of the Attribute Symbols.) Link to comment
Umbra Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 The OCG has surely improved, but there are still some things: only EARTH Attribute monsters can attack -> only EARTH Attribute monsters can declare an attack. also, on the Summoning effects, you should specify from where you can summon the card. Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less -> Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand, deck or Graveyard. Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Thanks, Umbra. Details edited. Link to comment
Razieus Posted November 10, 2007 Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 All of the stuff in Italics are your cards with the grammar editted and the effects editted as close to the OCG as I know. Also, how does Curse of the Hedgehog lose ATK and DEF when it's a Trap? Meditation of the Swordsman (Continuous Spell)CommonDBC-009Description: Increase the ATK of face-up Warrior-type monsters you control by 300 points. When a Warrior-Type monster declares an attack, they are unaffected by the effect(s) of Trap Cards and Quick-Play Spell Cards. Each time your opponent destroys a Warrior-type monster you control, inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Black Alien Dragon (Normal Monster)DarkLevel 5RareDBC-010DragonDescription: A black dragon that comes from the Gamma12 planet. This awful-looking creature is ironically pacificst and protective.2000/1800 Curse of the Dark Hedgehog (Normal Trap)Ultra-RareDBC-011Description: If your opponent Normal Summons or Flip Summons a monster, the Summoned monster is destroyed. If your opponent Special Summons(Including Ritual Summon and Fusion Summon) a monster, that monster cannot declare an attack and loses 1000 ATK and DEF points. Black Lava Dragon (Normal Monster)FireLevel 9Ultra RareDBC-012DragonDescription: A giant dragon armored with cooled down lava. This dragon has existed thousands of years. He doesn't like combat, but when he his forced to fight, this dragon is terribly powerful.3100/3300 Angel's Hope (Quick-Play Spell)CommonDBC-013Description: To activate this card, you must have at least one Fairy-type monster face-up on your Field. If one of your Fairy-type monsters is attacked, the monster is not destroyed and the battle damage you receive is 0. Guuzu Ishi (Effect Monster)EarthLevel 4CommonDBC-014RockDescription: If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you may pay 600 Life Points. If you do, return this card from your Graveyard to your hand.1300/2000 Hikari the Light Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-015FairyDescription: When this card is face-up on the Field, only LIGHT Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Yami the Dark Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-016Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only DARK Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your deck.1200/1200 Mizu the Aqua Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-017Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only WATER Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Honoo the Flame Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-018Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only FIRE Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Kaze the Wind Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-019Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only WIND Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Chi the Earth Angel (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-020Description: When this card is face-up on the Field, only EARTH Attribute monsters can declare an attack. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as the result of a battle, you can Special Summon a monster with an ATK of 1600 or less from your hand or your Deck.1200/1200 Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2007 Um, I wrote that the opponent's monster that is Special/Fusion/Ritual summoned loses 1000 ATK/DEF pts, I wasn't talkin' about the trap itself. Anyway thanks. Note: There is OCG on normal cards, too ? oO Link to comment
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 OCG? Doesn't that stand for Original Card Game, like the Japanese version? I wrote it the English way, but I figured the wordings were basically the same. And I fixed my translation of the Trap Card-it said "this monster". I usually think of the monster that's summoned as "that monster", so I thought it might've meant the Trap Card had an Embodiment of Apophis effect that was erased somehow... Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 No, by OCG I meant Official Card Grammar. Anyway, I have a bunch of cards to edit now ! SIGH ! <_>EDIT: Finally these cards are edited. Link to comment
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 I think they have OCG on the English versions...Also, what did ya mean you had a bunch to edit? Just copy and paste the edits from my post. Also, are you making any new cards? Maybe a fusion for Black Lava Dragon and Black Alien Dragon? Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 In fact, I already made them with the Card Maker (without posting them). Thanks anyway, they are edited. Fusions are programmed, don't worry. I made 6 more cards, here they are. Dragon Zombie EX (Effect monster)Level 5DBC-021ZombieThis monster cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Dragon Zombie". If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon a "Dragon Zombie SP" from your hand.2100/0 Dragon Zombie SP (Effect Monster)Level 8DBC-022ZombieThis card can only Special Summoned by the effect of "Dragon Zombie EX". You may pay 4000 Life Points to destroy all the cards on the Field of your opponent. If you do, skip your Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, both players loses 2000 Life Points.2800/0 Cyara - Dark Beast Servant (Effect Monster)Level 3DBC-023SpellcasterIf this card is equipped with "Dark Beasts Seal", you can Tribute this monster to Special Summon "Dark Beast Surai" or "Dark Beast Myara".1400/1000 Dark Beasts Seal (Equipment Spell)DBC-024This card can only equip a monster with "Dark Beast" in its name. The equipped monster raises its ATK and DEF by 300. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you may pay 1200 Life Points to return it in your hand. Thunder Dragon EX (Effect Monster)Level 6DBC-025ThunderThis monster cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing a "Thunder Dragon". If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon a "Thunder Dragon SP" from your hand.2200/2100 Thunder Dragon SPLevel 8DBC-026ThunderThis card can only Special Summoned by the effect of "Thunder Dragon EX". You may pay 3500 Life Points to choose one of the following effects:- Destroy all your opponent's Monsters on his Field.- Destroy all tour opponent's Spell and Trap cards on his Field.If you do, skip your next two Draw Phases. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, both players lose 2500 Life Points.2800/2700 Here they are. Link to comment
Razieus Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 That's pretty cool-Thunder Dragon EX/SP and Dragon Zombie EX/SP are based on real cards. Also, post a fusion! I'd be interested in what you make for a fusion. Newest cards(The EX/SP ones and Dark Beast Seals): 8/10 Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Fusions are programmed ! Don't worry ! ^^"For EX/SP versions, just wait 'til you have the pictured cards. They are awesome, if I say so myself. Link to comment
Tefached Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 edit the first post. it helps so ppl dont have to search the entire thread for your post(cards) Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 Edited, thanks. How're the cards, anyway ? Link to comment
Archangel of destiny Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 nice cards i can't wait to see the images Link to comment
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Okay, the cards are posted as images in my (remade) topic here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=15352 And, here is what I plan to do next. Supreme Fused Alien Dragon (Effect Fusion monster)Level 10DBC-027Pyro"Black Alien Dragon" + "Black Lava Dragon"When this card is face-up on the field, this monster cannot be attacked or affected by the effects of FIRE attribute monsters.3600/3200 Veyraa - Dark Beast Samurai (Effect Monster)Level 4DBC-028WarriorIf this card is equipped with "Dark Beasts Seal", you can Tribute this card to Special Summon "Dark Beast Surai" or "Dark Beast Myara".1700/1600 Chaos Distortion (Counter Trap)DBC-029Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. All of his monsters excepted the attacking monsters are destroyed and the attack is cancelled. Despair Temple (Trap)DBC-030When your opponent Summons a monster, you can:- Destroy this monster (if you do so, skip your next Draw Phase)- Discard one of your opponent's cards in his hand (if you do so, pay 800 Life Points)- Draw one card (if you do so, at his next Draw Phase your opponent draws 2 cards.)- Gain 1000 Life Points (if you do so, your opponent gains 2000 Life Points) Lone Undead Warrior (Normal Monster)Level 2DBC-031Since his army abandoned him thousands years ago, he is now a lone captain romaing the underworld, eternally feeling he has been betrayed.900/500 Link to comment
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