blearuto Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Cards do not belong in showcase. MOVED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Chaos Dragon - The way you've worded it, the monster's effect is active if EITHER player controls a "Chaos Guardian". Please verify if this is intended. There are also a handful of grammatical mistakes. I recommend just bumping it's ATK to 3000 and removing the 500 ATK increase (keep the trap negation). Chaos - Beast Warrior - I'm amazed that you actually messed up on such a short card effect... "If any monsters with 'Chaos' in their name exist on the field, this card can attack twice."Or something like that... Chaos General - State that the "Chaos" monster must be in play. Chaos Guardian - What an underpowered card. This thing is much too weak to be level 10. Heck, Chaos General is one tribute less, has more attack points, and destroys one card every turn. Chaos King - More grammatical errors. I feel that this card should be more powerful too. It's a synchro-monster after all and has pretty unique summon requirements. Chaos Queen - This effect is terribly thought out. First of all, why did you state that you need three tributes to summon it? That's a common fact about summoning a 10-star monster. That part of the effect is useless. The card is much too weak to be a 10-star monster as well, especially since you cannot summon it. The bogus about Chaos King is also not needed. You honestly think that anybody would go through the trouble of summoning Chaos General, synchroing that to make Chaos King, and sacrificing three monsters to tribute-summon Chaos Queen, all for 1000 attack points? Ever heard of "Axe of Despair"? This card is terribly under powered. Chaos Warlord - "This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned". That part is just redundant. Chaos Warrior - Re-read this card's effect. It makes no sense. Chaos Summoner - Wow! With all of the under-powered cards you created, I never thought you'd make something OVER-powered. A few quick-tips for you.- Proof-read your effects to ensure that you do not have grammatical mistakes.- Think about how strong your card is before throwing a bunch of stars on it. Just because your card is a 10-star doesn't make it awesome.- Make sure your card effects are logical and every word has a purpose. I'll give your set a 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Chaos Beast Warrior's pic is an actual pic, try to get your own please <_<'' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Good cards but lucifers right... the beast warrior is a real pic ^^ But what else buggs me is the "Chaos king" is actually Arthas from Warcraft xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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