Vile Machina Set

[HanuKazamushi]

You can Special Summon two "Vile Token" (MACHINE-Type/DARK/2 Star/ATK/500/DEF/100) in Defense mode. Discard one MACHINE-type from your hand in order to summon a "Vile Token".

 

This card is treated as a MACHINE-type monster. While a "Vile Machina" card is on the field this card cannot be attacked.

 

For every "Vile Machina" monster that is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle inflict 500 damage to opponents Life Points.

 

This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Vile Machina-Red Eyed Divas". You must tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon.

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Preparing the Machine". For every "Vile Token" on the field inflict 300 points of damage to your opponents Life Points.

 

If a "Vile Machina" is attacked increase it's ATK by 500.

 

Destroy all MACHINE-type monsters on the field, and inflict both 1000 points of damage to both you and your opponent.

 

Revive all MACHINE-type monsters from the graveyard that are 4 stars or lower. All MACHINE-type monsters are given a 500 additional ATK points.

[.Leo]

pretty good. OCG is ok. pics are ok. effects are nice 7/10

[Angel of Silence]

OCG is okay. Pics look fine. Effects are cool. 7.5/10

[HanuKazamushi]

Thanks but in what way can I correct them?

[Max Darkness]

Here are your OCG corrections (in bold). Effects that are completely bold are effects that had to be completely reworded.

 

Sisters of Damage

 

When this card is summoned, you can Special Summon 2 "Vile Tokens" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 100) in Defense Position. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Vile Token" from your Deck.

 

 

Enchanted Cyborg

 

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. As long as you control a different face-up "Vile Machina" monster, your opponent cannot declare this card as an attack target.

 

Breakdown

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time a "Vile Machina" monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Preparing the Machine

(You've taken the text from "Advanced Ritual Art" haven't you? That's why it's non-specific. Normal Ritual Spell Cards are specific.)

 

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Vile Machina-Red Eyed Divas". You must Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more from your field or hand.

 

Red Eyed Divas

 

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Preparing the Machine". When this card is summoned, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Vile Tokens" on the field x 300.

 

Take Down!

 

Activate only when a "Vile Machina" monster is attacked. Increase the ATK of the attacked monster by 500, until your End Phase.

 

Virus

 

Destroy all Machine-Type monsters on the field and inflict 1000 points of damage to both players.

 

Reboot

 

Special Summon as many Level 4 or lower Machine-Type monsters from your Graveyard as possible. All monsters summoned by this card's effect gain 500 ATK.

 

 

Interesting ideas certainly, but I would expand the role of the "Vile Tokens".

 

7/10

[HanuKazamushi]

Thanks alot, NOW I know what I did wrong

[ragnarok1945]

Limited Edition is not a real type, please change that.

 

8/10