amuzer Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 this is my first set :shock:... umm... its actually not finished but i want to see what you guys think...[spoiler=took me a while to figure out how to do spoilers...] enjoy and please rate... if you rate low tell me why pliz!the links to my 2 spell cards and my other card arent working... the spells came up as my yin yang card and the monster was the trap... oh well probly a screw up on my part...One last thing... wth is OCG?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 two of the cards need effects. Please give them some first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amuzer Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Not all cards have effects... right?Ex. Ryu-RanFire7 stars[Dragon]A vicious little dragon sheltered in an egg that looks deceptively harmless (Atk 2200 Def 2600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Cards should have effects but it isn't necessary. Bad OCG, and some pictures need work. Work on regular grammar, too. I like the dragon pictures. Cards need improvement. 6/10 I gave you your first rating. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amuzer Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Cards should have effects but it isn't necessary. Bad OCG' date=' and some pictures need work. Work on regular grammar, too. I like the dragon pictures. Cards need improvement. 6/10 I gave you your first rating. :D[/quote'] ty for the rating! the dragon pics were actually one pic and i just split it in two! which cards need grammatical work and wtf is OCG?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuckoos Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 what is OCG? Typical n00b move... Original Card Grammar, commonly abbreviated as "OCG", is the original card wording and text written on YGO cards in the TCG. However, OCG is important on the forums, because people who go to this section expect well made cards, not junk without proper wording. Here is an example of bad OCG:Monster:"Wen you sumin tis car, kill all munsters you Opponent has. ololololololololol." Your OCG is pretty bad, try and fix that. Pics are... not good. Yin is just Yang's pic reversed. Overall, you got a 4.5/10.Your nubness saved you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 You just abbreviate things and forget punctuation. It's mainly OCG, though. Also... The example for bad OCG Cuckoos wrote made me lolololololololololololol. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 bad ocg fake types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amuzer Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Thanx all for the feedback! I'll try to fix them all... and the pics aren't actually mine because i stink at drawing... so i couldn't find very good pics for this... and the yin and yang cards being reversed i did on purpose because i couldn't separate the two fish... and it would look stupid if i tried... so...... yeah... well if you could point out a few specific errors (i only found about 2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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