Zauls Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Please rate and comment. Thanks :D [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 DARK monsters you control. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. This card cannot attack directly on a turn that its effect is activated. When this card attacks twice during the same Battle Phase, add 1 DARK monster with 1500 or less ATK from your deck to your hand. Any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 There are a couple of OCG errors, but overall, these cards are well-done. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Thanks. BTW please could you point out a couple of examples of OCG errors, I can't find any myself but you are probably better at OCG than me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 They're mainly capitalisation errors: 'tributing'= 'Tributing''deck' = 'Deck' (Multiple) The Trap Card: Activate only when a "Battle-Raged Abyssal Warrior" on your side of the field attacks twice during your Battle Phase. Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 The cards look great. Pics are good. OCG is good after the fixes. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 8/10 Very good But have OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Tyvm guys. I will edit the OCG now.Ok there seems to be a problem with uploading the fixed OCG cards. They all came out as the same card. I'll Try my best to get them back to normal.Fixed it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 1st one is a bit UP, because Raviel is tribute 3 fiend-types and it has better aATK/DEF abd a better effect.Good though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 minor OCG errors. Last one's burn effect is a little small 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 minor OCG errors but when you fix them the cards would be close to perfect well done 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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