YugiohTheCardMaker Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 not very much to fix but you might wanna change gaint to giant k besides that awesome cards love them 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Besides the "gaint" mistake mentioned above... Capitalize "carsidaret".Fix the grammar mistakes in "carsidaret" (and all of your other cards).Fix the OCG of Zombie Hound and Man vs Beast.Learn how to spell "destroy" and "destroyed". Not very good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Capitalize "carsidaret." PLEASE improve on Grammar and your OCG is okay but it isn't the greatest. Attributes like: EARTH, DARK, WIND etc. should be in all caps and stats like ATK and DEF should also be in all caps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirThan Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 looks nice no fix is needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohTheCardMaker Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 this is so old i don't know why i'm posting here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Vampiress~ Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 bad ocgvanilla cardok pics7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
999Werthog Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 nothing wrong truly awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 lol, nice cards here is what the lore for "Man Vs. Beast" should be, also it should be a continuous spell. "This card is also treated as a quick-play spell card. Activate only when a BEAST-type monster is attacked. increase the ATK of all BEAST-type monsters you control by 1500." other than that, 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightsoul Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Change the pics of the first 299/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Those are great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohTheCardMaker Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Thanks I haven't posted here in 3 to 4 moths Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Øverek357Ø Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 good not great but good simple ocg bad pictures 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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