SK8TR»���» Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 R & Comment A T E [align=center]Sonic Heal[spoiler=Lore]Activate only during your opponent's Main Phase. After activation, Special Summon this card; it is treated as an Effect Monster Card (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 100/DEF 1500). This card cannot be attacked if there is another Earth monster on the Field.Every turn this card is on the field put 1 Counter on this card during each of your Standby Phases. When this card is destroyed, Increase your Life Points by the amount of counters by X 200 points. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Good concept, but you ruin the card with your grammatical and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Can you point you the Grammatical and OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 you spelled my name wrong^^you have already post this card^^you know my rate^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Can you point you the Grammatical and OCG errors. Hah, that's not my job. I'll give you a few examples though. - Don't use a semicolon. - Correct "feild" (I see you've already done so) - Put a comma after "feild", as you are starting a new clause - "Every turn this card is on the field put 1 Counter on this card during each of your Standby Phases" <---- This should be condensed to "During each of your Standby Phases, put 1 Counter on this card." - Specify what type of counter if possible - Do not capitalize "increase" in your last sentence - "Increase your Life Points by the amount of counters by X 200 points" is an ugly sentence. Change it to reduce the use of "by" to one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 seen the pic plenty of times over, there's some OCG errors too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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