cmc1234 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I have edited all the cards, because of bad ratings, and i like to listen to advice, so plz rate them now that they dont suck as much as they did. Plz rate. I Relize this card is usless unless you know your opponent has exodia but i made it anyways so dont rate this card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
740kt Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 For Harmful Healing, seriously? 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Not bad, but the images really make the set. The OCG is decent, but some of the card's have effects that are too simple. Some of them are overpowered, and "Neo Hunter" is Jinzo with a more powerful effect and a different image. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I second 740kt. Why not just increase the LP by 700? Also, you've got some OCG errors. I like the pictures, they're really good! Good job. 7.5/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Someone else got into Father Wolf's old pics? Aw, hell, everyone's used them at some point. They're practically public domain by now, so I won't even bother telling you how overused they are. I'll just point a couple things out, since Bengal pretty much already covered this: Exodia Extermination is pretty useless. You won't know if your opponent's got all of Exodia until he's already got it, and as soon as he declares victory you can't do much about it. Also, Story Book doesn't do you a lot of good since Toons don't have a load of support. Maybe if it allowed you to pay Life Points and attack directly with the equipped monster, but... Also, I thought Harmful Healing was a novel idea, if not necessarily a great one. It's just a different way to do the same thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Seeing as "Pot of Greed" and "Graceful Charity" were banned, your "Bucket of Greed" has no future. Card Slasher's effect doesn't work the way you intend it to. First of all, what's the point of picking three cards and THEN destroying two? You might as well just skip to the destroying cards part. Also, the whole "if one is a monster" thing will not work, because you are destroying two cards. Thus either two or none of the effects of your card will be activated. Ex1. I select a spell and a monster to destroy. Now two effects on your card are activated, because both requirements are met. Ex2. I select two of the same type of cards. The effect is negated. And why does my opponent lose 400LP but I would only lose 300? I suggest to keep it even. Evil Hero Blood Knight - Last bit of the effect should simply read "with 'Evil Hero' in it's name". Evil Hero Dark Speed Knight - You cannot discard cards to the field. Switch this to "graveyard". Evil Hero Draw - Switch the effect so that if the monster is 4 stars or less, it can be special summoned. Otherwise you don't need to include the last part. Evil Hero Speed Knight - Specify how many times the player can attack directly. Evil Spears - OP Harmful Healing - Why not just have the card increase your LP by 700? Monster Rejuvenate - Change the picture so that you are not copying "Destiny Draw". Evil Hero Lovley Fire - Fix the monster's name. It's not spelled properly. You also spelled "remains" and "field" incorrectly, and you forgot the word "attack". Just re-read the effect of this monster. It's attrocious. Exodia Externamantion - Learn how to spell the names of your own cards. This card is also uselss, seeing as having exodia gives you an automatic win. No trap card is going to help you. Evil Hero Ultimate Lord - OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 so my set sucks basicly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 so my set sucks basicly Purely suggestions on improving your cards. Nowhere did I say anything about your cards "sucking". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 k so if you could give me things i could use like ocg corrections and new names and stuff like that. plz tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 k so if you could give me things i could use like ocg corrections and new names and stuff like that. plz tell me As the creator of this card set, that is your job, my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 k i will if i think of thingsbump plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Harmful Healing's effect is somewhat on the OPed end with no drawback 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 bump plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axoren Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Wouldn't Evil Heros be Villains? The whole idea behind being a hero is being an honest to good savior. You're set is an oxymoron (no, that is not name calling, it's a proper term). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 no there are actual evil heros, they are elemental hero's, destiny hero's, and evil hero's, Evil hero- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Evil_Hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axoren Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 NEVER seen those used in a duel and I don't watch the shows as much anymore. Whoever did that within the Yu-Gi-Oh Franchise should be smacked... The cards overall are decent with only a few discrepancies. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 i never knew they were a type of card till a couple of days ago, it was going to be an elemntal hero set but i like the name evil hero better, and i agree with you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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lacikus Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 8/10 Some cards are OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 k thx for the rate and which ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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