Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 [spoiler=Effect]There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. During each of your End Phases, reduce the ATK of this card by 900. When the ATK of this card reaches 0, destroy all monsters you control and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the combined Levels of all monsters destroyed this way x 200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I'd raise it's atk slightly higher to 3000 Everything else is fine 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I'd raise it's atk slightly higher to 3000 Everything else is fine 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I'd raise it's atk slightly higher to 3000 Everything else is fine 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I'd raise it's atk slightly higher to 3000 Everything else is fine 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taichi Masaki Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Nice. A ticking time bomb effect.They should've used this in 5d's.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I suggest you to increase tis DEF not ATK. Because when this cards ATK reaches 2100 during the next turn it could be esily destroyed :? Aside from that, pretty good :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 The real Quechua translation of 'Triceratops' (my translation literally translates as 'Three Hard Lizard' as there is no direct translation for Triceratops) is Kimsa Ch'ukru Allallanka (Three Hard Lizard is what Triceratops means in Latin, I think). I like the effect, it's like LaDD with a great big bomb strapped to it. Lower it's ATK to 2700 or increase it's ATK to 3600 to make it a multiple of nine. It's DEF should perhaps be 2800? Anyway, I'll give it 8.5 out of 10. ~ Alf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 The real Quechua translation of 'Triceratops' (my translation literally translates as 'Three Hard Lizard' as there is no direct translation for Triceratops) is Kimsa Ch'ukru Allallanka (Three Hard Lizard is what Triceratops means in Latin' date=' I think). I like the effect, it's like LaDD with a great big bomb strapped to it. Lower it's ATK to 2700 or increase it's ATK to 3600 to make it a multiple of nine. It's DEF should perhaps be 2800? Anyway, I'll give it 8.5 out of 10. ~ Alf[/quote'] I suggest 2700. 3600 ATK is too much. Yeah he is a earthbound but still too much power!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I suggest you to increase tis DEF not ATK. Because when this cards ATK reaches 2100 during the next turn it could be esily destroyed :? Aside from that' date=' pretty good :D[/quote']Isnt it said that this monster cant be the target of an attack ;)...so it wont be easily destroyed 9/10, nice card =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I suggest you to increase tis DEF not ATK. Because when this cards ATK reaches 2100 during the next turn it could be esily destroyed :? Aside from that' date=' pretty good :D[/quote']Isnt it said that this monster cant be the target of an attack ;)...so it wont be easily destroyed 9/10, nice card =) I always forget this :? It is because I don't like earthbound monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 thanks to all for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Pic can be a little better everything else is ok 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Nice card but I've never liked the eartbounds. a 9/10.And Akiza Izayoi, triceratops means three horned Lizard or head (I never manage to remember that last part). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Nice card but I've never liked the eartbounds. a 9/10.And Akiza Izayoi' date=' triceratops means three horned Lizard or head (I never manage to remember that last part).[/quote'] I couldn't find or construct a good translation for 'Horned' in Quechua so I just used Ch'ukru which means 'hard' or 'harden' instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Pic can be a little better everything else is ok 9/10 pic could be better, how? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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