Undead Army "kind of new to this"

[whitewings12]

Yay here are more crappy cards for everyone to flame on enjoy ^^

 

jk but i am well aware of the fact that they arent very good criticism, tips and suggestions are very welcome, and yes i know most pics are from wow or fan art of wow. these cards arentment to be wow cards. (all pics found using Google image search i havent created any of these images and if anyone complains theyll be removed ASAP)

 

without further ado

 

this card can only be special summoned from the graveyard by tributing 3 non Zombie monsters whose combined level is equal to or greater than 8. As long as this card is face up on the field no cards can be removed from play. When this card attacks your opponents life points directly he discards the top card of his deck to the graveyard. If that card is a non Zombie-type monster card you can special summon 1 "Undead monster from your graveyard".

 

This card can only be special summoned from the graveyard by tributing monster(s) whose level is equal to or greater than 4. as long as thiscard is in face-up attack position gain 500 lifepoints during each of your standby phases. When this card destroys a non Zombie-type monster by battle you can special summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your graveyard in face up attack position.

 

You can discard this card from your hand to the graveyard to destroy 1 non zombie type monster on your opponents side of the field. If this card is in your graveyard When you control a face up "undead" monster other than "Undead Swordsman" you can special summon it in face up attack position.

 

This card can only be special summoned from the graveyard by tributing 2 or more monsters whose combined level is equal to or greater than 7. You can discard 1 "Dark" monster to Reduce the ATK and DEF of all face up non Zombie-type monsters by 500 points until the end phase of this turn. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

this card can only be special summoned from the graveyard by tributing 2 or more non Zombie-type monsters whose combined level is equal to or greater than 4. When you summon an "Undead" monster to your side of the field you can add 1 spell card from your deck to your hand. As long as this card is face up on your side of the field all normal spell cards are treated as Quick play spell cards.

 

Support:

 

Once per turn you can look at the top card of your opponents deck if its a monster card you can special summon a monster from your hand whos level is equal to or lower than that monsters level. If its not a monster card, discard 1 card from your hand.

 

Once per turn you can discard 1 monster from your hand to special sujmmon 1 "Imp Token" (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 700) to your side of the field in face up attack position.

 

You can select 1 monster on your opponents side of the field and use it as a sacrifice for the summoning of an "Undead" monster.

 

Activate only while you control 3 or more "Undead" monsters. Destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field.

 

Special summon 1 "Undead Swordsman" from your hand.

 

Activate only while you control a face up "Undead" monster. Destroy 1 Monster and 1 Spell or trap card on oyur opponents side of the field. Then inflict damage to your opponents lif points equal to the level of the monster x 200.

 

This card can only be activated when your opponent has 1 non Zombie-type monster on his side of the field. Destroy the monster and special summon 1 Undead Swordsman or Undead Spellcaster from your hand or deck.

 

Every time you special summon a monster place 1 "Dark Ritual" counter (max 4) on this card. You can remove 2 "Dark Ritual" counters to special summon 1 "Undead" monster from your Hand or Deck.

 

You have an"Undead" monster in your graveyard you can special summon this card. When this card is Flip summoned you can add 1 "Servant of the Dead" from your deck to your hand.

 

Every time you or your opponent tributes a monster to special summon a "Undead" monster you gain 1000 life points.

 

Select 1 card on you opponents side of the field and destroy it. If the card is face down flip a coin. If the result is Heads destroy the card. If the result is Tails discard 1 card from your hand.

 

Discard up to 3 cards from your hand. Destroy 1 monster on the field for each card discarded and inflict 500 pints of damage to the owner of the card.

 

Select 3 "Undead" monsters from your deck and show them to your opponents. your opponent then selects 2 and sends them to the graveyard. add the remaining card to your hand.

 

Select 1 monster on your opponents side of the field and send it to the graveyard. Special summon from your hand 1 Zombie-type monster whos level is equal to the targeted monster. When this card is removed from the field, destroy that monster. When that monster is removed from the field, destroy this card.You take 500 Points of damage to your lifepoints during each of your standby phases as long as this card is face up on the field

 

You must discard 1 card from your hand during each of your standby phases. If You control a face up "Undead" monster this card cannot be destroyed. Any Zombie-type monster sent to the graveyard is special summoned during the end phase of that turn. When you normal summon a monster you can special summon a monster whos level is equal to or less than the level of the normal summoned monster from your deck. When this card is sent to the graveyard you can special sumon as many "Undead" monsters from your hand as possible.

[ragnarok1945]

I don't think they're all crappy. Most look well balanced out, though a few have too simple effects

 

9/10

[Max Darkness]

These aren't bad at all.

Your OCG is actually pretty good for a New Member.

Keep it up.

 

9/10

 

PS, you might find this club helpful: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-137084.html

 

EDIT:

 

Your OCG seems to show repeated problems. (Actually, the way these cards are written, a lot of them could be turned into Ritual Monsters).

 

Undead Knightlord

The pic's overused somewhat.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by Tributing 3 non-Zombie-Type monsters from your field or hand whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, cards cannot be removed from play. When this card attacks your opponent directly, they pick up the top card from their Deck and discard it. If the card is a non-Zombie-Type monster, Special Summon 1 "Undead" monster from your Graveyard.

 

Undead Healer

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by Tributing monsters from your field or hand whose total Level Stars equal 4 or more. During each of your Standby Phases, gain 500 Life Points. When this card destroys a non-Zombie-Type monster, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position.

 

Undead Swordsman

Crop the pic to remove the border.

 

You can discard this card from your hand to destroy 1 non-Zombie-Type monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is in the Graveyard while you control a face-up "Undead" monster, Special Summon this card during your End Phase.

 

Undead Darknight

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by Tributing 2 or more monsters from your field or hand whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 DARK monster from your side of the field to decrease the ATK and DEF of all non-Zombie-Type monsters by 500, until your End Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

Undead Spellcaster

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by Tributing 2 non-Zombie-Type monsters whose total Level Stars equal 4 or more. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time you summon an "Undead" monster, add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Spell Cards are treated as Quick-Play Spell Cards.

 

Dark Snitch

 

Once per turn, during your End Phase, pick up the top card from your opponent's Deck. If the card is a Monster Card, put the card on the bottom of your opponent's Deck and Special Summon 1 monster from your Deck whose Level Stars are equal to or less than the monster. If the card is a Spell or Trap Card, discard 1 card from your hand.

 

Imp Warrior

There are a lot of "Imp Warrior" cards on this site with that pic.

 

Once per turn, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Imp Token" (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 700) to your side of the field in Attack Position.

 

Captured Sacrifice

 

Select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field whose Level Stars equals the Level Stars of an "Undead" monster in your hand. Tribute the selected monster to Special Summon the "Undead" monster to your side of the field. When the summoned monster is destroyed, your opponent gains 2000 Life Points.

 

Crusade of the Doomed

 

Activate only when you control at least 3 "Undead" monsters. Destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. (This needs a balancing effect)

 

Crypt-Trained Warrior

Turn into a Normal Spell Card.

 

Special Summon 1 "Undead Swordsman" from your hand in Attack Position.

 

Death Breath

 

Activate only when you control a face-up "Undead" monster. Destroy 1 Monster Card and 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. You can only activate 1 "Death Breath" per turn.

 

Overswarm

 

Activate only when your opponent controls at least 1 non-Zombie-Type monster and you control no monsters. Select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and destroy it. Special Summon 1 "Undead Spellcaster" or "Undead Swordsman" from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.

 

Ritual of the Damned

 

Each time you summon 1 DARK monster, put 1 Dark Ritual Counter on this card (Max. 4). Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 2 Dark Ritual Counters from this card. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Undead" monster from your hand or Deck.

 

Servant of the Dead

 

As long as an "Undead" monster is in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Flip Summoned, add 1 "Servant of the Dead" to your hand from your Deck.

 

Soul Steal

 

Activate only when your opponent Tributes a monster. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, each time your opponent Tributes a monster, gain 500 Life Points. During each of your End Phases, discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. If you do not, this card is destroyed.

 

Undead Archer

 

Select 1 face-down card on your opponent's side of the field, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, destroy the selected card. If you call it wrong, discard 1 card from your hand.

 

Undead Gathering

 

Draw 3 "Undead" cards from your Deck and show them to your opponent. Your opponent selects 2 of the drawn cards. Discard the selected cards and add the unselected card to your hand.

 

Undead Plague

The effect doesn't seem to make much sense.

 

Undead World

Again, I'm not really sure what you're trying to say, and I don't think it should be an Equip Spell Card.