Choke Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 New card. One of my more simpler effects :/. Rates/Comments/Fixes please. Image Credit goes to ~clockworkdragon2 on deviantART. Effect: If 2 WATER monsters are Tributed to Special Summon this card, this card gains 500 ATK. If this card is targeted by a FIRE monster, you can remove 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard from play to change the target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Great card, I love the holo. Simple yet useful, keep it up! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 its "in your Graveyard from play" and do you mean something like "you can tribute 2 WATER monsters on your field to Special Summon this card?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Thanks. Yeah that's what I was trying to do. Probably my shortest effect i've ever made. Just made for a WATER deck. Thanks for the rating.No Raptor, I'm just saying, you don't HAVE to send 2 WATER monsters as Tributes to Special Summon this card, but if you do, this card gains 500 ATK. Thanks for the fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minnieman12 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 cool 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Simple yet effective good card love the holo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Like koramore said, it's a simple yet effective card. I really like the image too. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Nice card! Great WATER support. I'll give it a 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 "You can Tribute 2 WATER monsters to Special Summon this card. When this card is Special Summoned, this card to gains 500 ATK. If this card is selected as the target of a FIRE monsters effect, or selected as an attack target by a FIRE monster your opponent controls, you can remove from play 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard to switch the target to another face-up monster you control."I think that sounds right. <.< Sounds like a lot of plusses, but even so, that's pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 I appreciate the fix and I think it may work. But I just don't think people are understanding the first effect to it's fullest. The first effect just means if you Special Summoned the card by Tributing 2 WATER monsters, you gain 500 ATK. But if you don't Special Summon the card that way, you don't gain 500 ATK. It's just treated as a normal Special Summon. Maybe with the help of Yugi, it could be reworded as follows : "You can Tribute 2 WATER monsters to Special Summon this card and gain 500 ATK." Now maybe that is what your probably trying to say Yugi, so my apologies if you are, just needs some rewording. The rest of the fix seems fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 minor OCG errors. Effect seems a bit too simple, but it works 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 No, that fix is how it should be. See, it says "can" which means you don't have to. And it means, if it is Special Summoned, then it gets the ATK, but if it isn't, it doesn't. So ya, I am saying it like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 i love it!my favorite cards are cards with simple, easy effects. and this one hit the target!9.7/10great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 9/10 very good effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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