thomas41 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 My 6 ninja cards. Please rate. Rate like a good critic!! If there are any errors PLEASE Tell me. Go by these ratings 1=bad2=ok3=good cards but need work4=minimal errors [if you think they are good but don't like the pictures PM me on where to find better ones]5=perfect I will give you a +1 rep if you rate it like you would anyone else's. I'm new and would like suggestions before I finish the set. PM any good ideas for cards that you would like to see in this set. I am trying to make 60 cards. This is the beginning!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 all of your images are blurrysome need a backgroundyour OCG is off good luck on your way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thomas41 Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 thanks fr the review. I will make these cards better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Well some of the pics are blurry.Some pics don't have a background.Some pics have text in them.Pics: Bad.------------------------------------------------------Capitalize everything in card names but A, The and Of.You can barely see the synchros name.------------------------------------------------------Capitalize a letter starting a sentence.Do not skip a line (or 2) with synchro effects, do this:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters(Effect Here)Work on gammar/OCG.------------------------------------------------------There ok but you need to work on them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 this cards need a lot of work the start is good but you need better pics improve your OCG I'll give ya a 3/5 ^_^ based on your rating system Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 give some pics a backgorund/make less blurrymake sure you have good OCGu can find good pics in the Showcase section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Can i still get a rep if i do an OCG fix?either way, here is an OCG fix? Ninja BunnyThis card gains 500 ATK for each Tuner monster in the Graveyard. Ninja WarriorActivate only during your opponent's Battle Phase. Pay 500 Life Points. During this turn, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. During your End Phase, pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, destroy this card. Robo Ninja1 "Ninja" Tuner + 1 non-TunerThis card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the Tuner monster used in the Synchro Summon of this card. Ninja WolfThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 "Ninja" cards in your Graveyard from play. The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to total Levels of the removed monsters x 400. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can return it to the Deck instead. This effect can only be used once per Duel. True Blood of a NinjaEquip only to a "Ninja" monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. Once per turn, inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each card in their hand. When the equipped monster is destroyed, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon it from the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan912 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 You need some OCG, but good work on the pictures. Ninja Warrior is cute, but has white in the background. And most of you pictures I notice some fuzzynezz, but maybe that happened when you probbably compressed the photos :) Good Work, as a New Member :) I will give you a 7/10 for trying your hardest. :) :) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 You did a good job for a new member. Your ninjas are all blurry, there is a vanilla card, and some of your OCG is off. But a solid effort! Nice job! 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thomas41 Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Thanks for the rates!I will fix these. but first I have to give people+1rep!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaraptor Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 its hard to read the effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 The pics are blurryThere are OCG errorsIntereting ideai think you should continue the set6/10i recomend visiting this thread for some helphttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-137084-post-2604882.html#pid2604882 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 well i see i still didn't get a rep so i'll review them one by one. Ninja Bunny- The effect is overpowered, having just 2 tuners in the grave makes her ATK 1700, having 3 means she's 2200. Monsters tend to hit the grave a lot, so if you decrease the ATK increase to 300 for each tuner, she'll be alright. Also the fact that she's 4 stars makes her extra rigged, most 4 star tuners have a drawback, you should put one in to make her balanced. Ninja warrior - having to only pay 500 life points is too little, because he's almost a guarantee of having a synchro next turn, also he's a 4 star tuner with no drawback, that too needs fixing. Robo ninja - who should make him 8 stars not 7. the Atk increase can be easily abused, because, Ninja bunny gets an ATK increase and if you use ninja bunny for the synchro summon, you have a superbeatstick, make his effect say he gets ATk for the original ATK of the tuner. Ninja Wolf - the only problem i have with this is the fact that you can also remove ninja spells and traps to bring him. fix that little problem and he's good True blood of a ninja - Good a balanced, nothing to change. Overall, the cards need fixing, so does the OCG (i provided a fix in a earlier post), the images are blurry, next time check deviantart.com there are hundreds of ninja pics and you can definitely use them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 OCG is a little off, and the pics are blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 all 6 pics are blurry, some minor OCG mistakes 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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