mazacr Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 First, sorry for my bad english, i'm just from germany :/ (And the card is also in german :( ) Holo: please rate^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 I don't want to get my German to English dictionary out. Can you write out the lore in English? Meanwhile, I'll just rate you on the pic, which I'll give 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 German: du must hier englisch, schreiben sonst wird dein thread geschlossen, die card is viel zu stark sie hatt 1900 ATK und DEF dazu noch einen guten effect und nur 1 stern English OCG fix: Once per turn, during your Main Phase you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 and that makes the effect too simple and somewhat OPed, so that only gets 7/10 from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 yeah it is totally OP^^but the image is great ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 I like the holoed version better personally. The image is good, the OCG is perfect from what Wanderley wrote out, but the effect is not that creative. Maybe add in a Life Point cost or change it to 2 cards to balance it out somewhat. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mazacr Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 ahm, first, all of the warriors are level 1, and i could change the effect to: "in each main phases you must pay 300 life points. if not this card must send to the graveyard" okay? is the grammar okay? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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