card grammar help

[JARVISD09]

This card has obvious grammer issues. If you understand what this card is supposed to do, help?

 

[Bengal]

"Each time your opponent declares an attack, flip a coin.

-If the result is heads, your opponent can attack you directly.

-If the result is tails, negate the attack and increase the attacking monsters ATK and DEF by 1000."

 

^That's how I think it should be^

[JARVISD09]

thanx ill change it to that

[Max Darkness]

It's alright, quite risky though.

 

OCG Fix:

Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, negate the attack and the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF until your End Phase (balancing). If you call it wrong, the attacking monster can attack you directly.

 

5/10

[Bengal]

Max Darkness's OCG fix sounds better to me, however if you want to keep the heads and tails part in there:

 

"When your opponent declares an attack, toss a coin. *Heads: the attacking monster can attack you directly. *Tails: negate the attack and the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF until your End Phase."

 

I was referencing "Cup of Ace" to get this OCG.

[Max Darkness]

Max Darkness's OCG fix sounds better to me' date=' however if you want to keep the heads and tails part in there:

 

"When your opponent declares an attack, toss a coin. *Heads: the attacking monster can attack you directly. *Tails: negate the attack and the attacking monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF until your End Phase."

 

I was referencing "Cup of Ace" to get this OCG.

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Fine, I referenced "Time Wizard" and others.