Absolix Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 my first cardThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned, when a Level 5 or higher "Evil Hero" monster is destroyed. When this card is Special Summoned, Release 1 "Evil Hero" monster you control and increase the ATK of this card by 200 and decrease it's DEF by 200. When a monster with "Hero" in it's name is Normal Summoned, Release the Summoned monster and activate the appropriate effect based on the Released monsters name:“Evil Hero” - Draw 1 card and add 1 Level 4 or lower "Evil Hero" monster from your Graveyard to your hand“Destiny Hero” - Increase the ATK of all monsters your opponent controls by 200, until the end of your next turn. Until the end of your next turn, this card is unaffected by Spell Cards.“Elemental Hero” - Add 1 "Skyscraper" Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand.After activating the effect of this card, destroy this card and inflict 1000 Direct Damage to both player's Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Eww.Bad pic.Bad name.Wall of Text > Effect.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Quite good. Pic is a bit weird and you spelt fiend wrong.8/10 good try for 1st card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Wow. A WALL OF TEXT!!!1/10 fix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Quite good. Pic is a bit weird and you spelt fiend wrong.8/10 good try for 1st card. Hmmm.... you have a very weird taste in cards, it has the OCG from duel masters or some other TCG that isn't yugioh. The pic is not good at all. The effect wouldn't be able to be read on a REAL yugioh card. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Be nice its his 1st card! Pic needs work and few OCG errors. Take out some of the effects. 6/10 for the card8/20 coz its your 1st10/10 coz its different Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolix Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Wow. A WALL OF TEXT!!!1/10 fix'd damn if you are going to speak like that dont bother postingits my god damn first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I think that he is using Japanese 5D's OCG so, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Reli don't like the picthe effect is way to long and has some OCG errorsand why did you choose that for a card name?!2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Absolix Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 look its one of my fav online game badguys ok im starting to think it was a bad idea joining Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan912 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Okay card. 7/10. Too much text though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven_The_Maker Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 7/10 becaue of the pic and Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 It is never a bad idea to join, actually it is good that you joined because you can work on your card making skills. Do you think that everybody is good at their first cards? No, my first cards were horrid beyond recognition. I still have trouble to this day but what i am saying is the more cards that you make the better the outcome and appearence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 pic is really bad, but the idea is sound, so 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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