Demon Sorceress (Fixed and with no OCG errors as far as most people can tell)

[Lost Soul]

Hiya people. How ya doing? Well, here is me cards. Enjoy and plz rate. Dang i have edited so many times i should print it off (but i a to lazy to lol)

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[spoiler= Lore:]This card is also treated as a Fiend-type monster while face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 Trap cards from your Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 1500 until the End Phase. Once per turn, you can remove from play 2 Spell cards from your Graveyard to increase the DEF of this card by 1500 until the End Phase.

 

This card's

Original ATK/DEF 1500

2nd ATK/DEF 1000

3rd ATK/DEF 1200

 

I ahve edited this card about 5 times, 2 times where i didnt change the ATK/DEF

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

o-o "in till" = "until

 

good effect though.

8/10

 

the pic doesnt match the name

[Zauls]

It is OP for a start, reduce it to 800 increase and that would be acceptable. Also there is 1 spelling mistake, you put 'in less' instead of 'unless'. The pic is pretty good though.

7/10

[Lost Soul]

oh. spell check never finds that for me....

Plus she is holding a staff, and in inuyasha demons hide their true form.

And it is NOT an inuyasha card

better name suggustion then?

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

It is OP for a start' date=' reduce it to 800 increase and that would be acceptable. Also there is 1 spelling mistake, you put 'in less' instead of 'unless'. The pic is pretty good though.

7/10

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its not OP look at its level. If the attack increase was just 800 it would become vastly UP. and the spelling mistake you point out isnt in the effect

[Lost Soul]

lol that is cuss i fixed. The best part is that once per turn effects can be activated during either players turns

[Overlord Lucan]

Its somewhat OP, because you dont specifiy where they are removed from, you could remove two traps on your opponents field and get a 1500 boost, you could remove them from your or your opponents graveyard, heck you could even remove them from your hand (Ok thats abit extreme but still). So its a card that can remove 2 spells and 2 traps from your opponents field each turn and instead of paying for it your rewarded

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

?? I thought you fixed the "in till" to until

 

no

 

"in less" to unless

[Jaxx541]

really good, love the card all together 10/10

[Lost Soul]

Its somewhat OP' date=' because you dont specifiy where they are removed from, you could remove two traps on your opponents field and get a 1500 boost, you could remove them from your or your opponents graveyard, heck you could even remove them from your hand (Ok thats abit extreme but still). So its a card that can remove 2 spells and 2 traps from your opponents field each turn and instead of paying for it your rewarded

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oh, i should fix it so it says "from the your Graveyard". on it

[Overlord Lucan]

That would stop it from being OP

[Lost Soul]

good thing i fixed it then

[Overlord Lucan]

Much better. Effect isn't to original, the OCG is good, the pic fits, the attacks a bit low but I can see why you made it like that. 7.6/10

[ragnarok1945]

with the OCG fixed, the effect is great, pic is great, stats could be just slightly higher though

 

9/10

[General Assclown]

the pic doesnt match the name

 

Agreed.

 

Good pic but doesn't suit the name, effect is alright, not UP'd or OP'd....OCG is perfect ( I think )

 

8.7 / 10