Monkie_Crew Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Well i've tried to correct as many errors as i can. but i still want ppl to check if they need anymore works (they probably do knowing me lol) and thx for the help (btw i didnt' change my trap card cuz i dont know wats wrong with it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 not the first time I've seen Necromancer of War's pic Where's the Undead Horror card? I want to see that one too. For accumulated pain, not sure you're allowed to put the 15% of the opponent's LP. Better if you just declare a number and say that's how much damage he/she'll receive. Some MAJOR work needs to be done on the OCG 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkie_Crew Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 hmmm so u suggest me use a different picture for the necro? I dont have a undead horror card yet becuz i wanna get the grammar thing right b4 i make anymore cards. and can u give me some example of errors of the grammar? (the thing is i've checked the grammar forum linked by some1 on the other thread i posted... and i really can't see anything run with it lol... i mean i used all the *official words* wat else can i do? sorry if i'm asking too much i just wanna learn this lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 you don't have to use a different pic. I didn't say the pic is overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 The 1st card effect should be,If you send 1 'Aura or the rich' plus 2 monsters to Special Summon.....ect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Go here and your OCG questions will be answered http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-118387.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkie_Crew Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 hmm i did went to that forum... thats where i correct my old mistakes lol i guess i need read more carefully DXand for the aura of the lich, the idea is u need 2 corpses to summon the undead horror thats why i picked 2 monster cards in the graveyard, u know, slained monster? lol? anyway my plan was use 2 monster cards from the graveyard then remvoe them from the *playing field* (or the card board) which includes the graveyard. is that allowed? And i just made a few more cards for the necro lol, im sure they're full of problems o.o lol i just found out there is *hell hound* on my undead horror picture ... i mite need 2 get that fixed XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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