lastienzo Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 "This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 1 "Jinzo - Lord" on your field. While this card is face-up, no Trap Cards can be activated. Any Trap Card activated is removed from play. Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card removed from play by this effect. When this card is destroyed, remove it from play, Special Summon 1 "Jinzo - Returner" from your Graveyard." Please help me improve it. And could anyone direct me to someone that could help me make the card image look shiny? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Thats a pic of a real card isn't it? Also, "While this card is face-up, no Trap Cards can be activated. Any Trap Card activated is removed from play" Kinda pointless because Trap Cards can't be activated so how will you activate a Trap Card to remove it from play? Some OCG errors, not creative (because its based on a real card with similar effect as it). 7 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lastienzo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/8/8d/Jinzo-LordLODT-EN-SR-1E.png trap cards can be activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Then why does it say they can't in the effect? And the link you gave me was of Jinzo - Lord. I'm guessing that you were trying to copy that effect. That just takes creativeness even lower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lastienzo Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 sorry i get it. i was looking at more than 1 jinzo card to make it related or similar to them. but thank you for showing me the mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 The pic is just a mildly edited version of another card, which shows no effort. The effect is just a copy of Jinzo - Lord. It is basically all Jinzo - Lord but with a different name.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EnkoMaun Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 The pic is just a mildly edited version of another card' date=' which shows no effort. The effect is just a copy of Jinzo - Lord. It is basically all Jinzo - Lord but with a different name.4/10[/quote']^this. OCG fix: This card can only be Summoned by removing from play 1 "Jinzo - Lord" you control. While this card is face-up, no Trap Cards can be activated. All face-up Trap Cards on the field are removed from play. Inflict 300 damage to your opponent's Life Points for each card removed from play by this effect. If this card would be destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Jinzo - Returner" from your Graveyard. I think the bold part is what you mean by "activated Trap Cards." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 omg another fricking jonzo, i hate jinzo and there are so many pics of him and evreyone tries doing a crappy remake of him, when someone does a remake it never shows creativeness when you make aa card thats not jinzo ill rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Pic is already a limited edition jinzo. Effect makes no senseTry again please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 since ur one star, i'll just say 5.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 some OCG errors, and I still prefer the original Jinzo's effect anyway 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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