Hexanort Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 [spoiler=lore]If you control no monsters and your opponent controls 2 or more monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Normal Summoned, all monsters your opponent controls are switched to Defence Position. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 LIGHT monster you control, increase this card's ATK equal than half of ATK of the Tributed monster until the End Phase of the turn this effect is activated. This card is unaffected by effect of a DARK monster. support i might add some support card later, please rate.... oh almost forgot, pic credithttp://th00.deviantart.net/fs47/300W/f/2009/194/8/6/Quetzalcoatl___Kukulcan_by_GENZOMAN.jpghttp://th05.deviantart.net/fs6/300W/i/2005/087/2/7/power_clash_by_blue_inu.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Whats good:Great pic. Effect balanced.ATK/DEF balanced.Name sounds cool.I dont look hard but i dont see OCG errors. Problems:A card this strong needs circulation 1st edition.No ID. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 [align=center]The effect is fairly balanced. The only overpowered part of it is the switching to Defence Position part. To show you the fixes: If you control no monsters on your field and your opponent controls at least 2 or more monsters on his/her field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Normal Summoned, all monsters on your opponent's field isyour opponent controls are switched to Defense Position. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 LIGHT monster you control, increase this card's ATK equal than half of ATK of the Tributed monster until the End Phase of the turn this effect is activated. This card is unaffected by effect of a DARK monster. And the effect as normal"If you control no monsters and your opponent controls 2 or more monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Normal Summoned, all monsters your opponent controls are switched to Defence Position. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 LIGHT monster you control, increase this card's ATK equal than half of ATK of the Tributed monster until the End Phase of the turn this effect is activated. This card is unaffected by effect of a DARK monster."[/align] *Added the Normal Summon part for balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Liam pointed out the OCG. Everything else is good. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I only do my best to help others. Pic is good and kinda Yugioh-ish. Hope you don't mind me editing the effect with the Normal Summon requirement, but it makes the card more playable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hero2die Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Wow it looks Great!And the Effect is good too,it´s the new Cyber Dragon^^ Very Good Job! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 *Edited* thanks liam, i'm just returned here after a while offline, so my card making sense is a bit off now. anyway thanks for comment..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 No problem, just helping fellow members. I try to set a good example for raters. A rate should be detailed and stable.Include an OCG fix, an idea fix, fairness change, image recommendations, name changes, additional effect ideas/ support ideas etc. --Your new card has no visible OCG errors. I don't see any, but I skim read.Image is a c4d/ digital trance form image. It's good and very Yugioh like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 effect is quite balanced, the pic looks neat, I see only minor OCG errors, so I'll give it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 B>U>M>P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 like the pic it suits the card the effect is balanced8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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